New Villain Todoroki Shoto Idea and I Need Reviews

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So, basically I have an idea that I need to get out all my thoughts. It's basically another Todoroki Shoto Villain AU, but I didn't know if anyone else would like it. So, here we are! I will be posting this to my most popular BNHA books.

Anyways, here's the first draft of what the story is mainly about, and keep in mind this is a whole different AU than the source material;

Behind closed doors, without letting Kyudai Garaki or Shigaraki Tomura know anything about it, All For One hatches his first Nomu project. He is assisted by a man named Kagakusha Akunin, who he has know for many many years, but it is unknown how, when, and where they met.

Kagakusha's quirk is a type of healing quirk. Say, if someone looses an arm, Kagakusha can reattach the arm to the person's body, or use someone else's arm. It doesn't matter if their blood types match or not and the person's body will not reject it. One of the only mature drawbacks of this quirk is that the detached limb has to be fairly new. If it has been over 48 hours, Kagakusha's quirk will be useless.

All For One might want to use Kagakusha for his limb attaching quirk, and for his twisted mind and ideas. For this first Nomu idea, All For One decided on using the youngest child of the #2 Pro Hero at the time, Endeavor. All For One knew of Enji's home life, since obviously he would, and knew Shoto would be a perfect test subject. Mostly because of his already powerful Fire/Ice quirk. But when Kagakusha's henchman men arrived to kidnap Shoto, they found the house practically destroyed and everyone but their target dead.
(How they died can be revealed in the story)

11 years later, after the war, and Midoriya is back at UA, a rouge vehicle that police and Heroes suspect is either housing many escaped criminals or is filled with stolen cash, is on a highway chase from police cars. The vehicle eventually escapes the cops, but ends up crashing somewhere else in town. Todoroki Shoto was being transported to Kagakusha's new head quarters in that vehicle. Being the only one who survived, Todoroki manages to escape the vehicle, and flees into the city. The urge to cause chaos and destruction all that matters to Shoto.

Shoto will also change his/her name to Hokori Shoto, to not be associated with the past and to forget.

I still don't know if I want to make Shoto a female in this story, but I really really want to!! But I guess he could still be a male. That's also for you all to judge. Might make him a girl tho..idk ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ᵐᵃʸᵇᵉ

Here are the quirks I wanted Shoto to have.
This is kinda like a pole, so just use this emoji ✅ for yes, and this emoji ❌ for no if you like the quirk idea! The highest positive voted ones will be used if the story is made!

・Dragon: This quirk allows it's user to breath fire (and/or ice in Shoto's case), manipulate all types of fire, sprout wings to fly, have horns and a tail, hands can grow into dragon claws (which can be turned into Posion Claw), and sharp teeth.
Drawbacks to this is that it is the most energy using quirk, and breathing fire can singe the inside of Shoto's mouth, and ice can freeze it to where it takes a while to thaw out.

・Lava/Magma: This quirk allows its user to create lava by melting down anything he/she touches. It also allows its user to control the magma at the center of the earth.
The drawbacks to this quirk is overheating. Since the spinal corde is something like a nuclear reactor, it can overheat when controlling massive amounts of lava at one time, which can lead to organ failure. Shoto's ice quirk can be used to cool himself down however, and use this quirk for longer.

・Blade: This quirk allows its user to sprout out blades from any where on their body. The blades are so sharp that they can cut through almost anything. Shoto's main use of this quirk is on his/her fingernails, making them into long sharp claw-like weapons.
The only downside to this quirk is that the blades can't cut through hard metals, stone, glass, sand, and water.

・Jumping Spider: This quirk allows its user to jump insanely high, at least 14 feet high, and also makes them very fast on their feet. They can also sprout another set of arms, and can shoot out webs from fingers tips that can harden into steel thanks to blade quirk.

・Voodoo Doll: This quirk allows its user to control anyone who's blood they drink. When they ingest a persons blood, they can control their bodies however they want. Like for example bending their joints or limbs in ways that are impossible for any human being to preform. And if the user did not want to control the person who they drink their blood, that person will be completely paralyzed, falling to the floor in the last position they were in before their blood was ingested. Like if you push a statue over. The amount of time this could last would depend on the persons blood type and how much was ingested.
The downside to this quirk is that the holder of this quirk gets addicted to drinking blood and anything that has to do with blood. And in some cases, the flesh of a victim is craved. Going long periods without drinking another persons blood leaves the holder of this quirk with withdrawal-like symptoms.

・Poison Claw: This quirk allows its user to grow large razor sharp claws that are laced with a deadly poison. When someone is cut by these claws, even the tiniest of scratches, could become poisoned. The poison start to rot the victim making their blood coagulate, their flesh rot and seem to melt, and their bones turn into something with the texture of curdled milk. to stop the poison the area which the wound is located needs to be amputated within 30 seconds.
The downsides are when this quirk is used for long periods of time, it leaves the holder's arms covered with sensitive bruised that last for as long as 48 hours.

・Shock Absorption: This quirk allows its user to reduce the effectiveness of physical blows by absorbing the shocks produced by them. These attacks back be fired back at the original attacker, like recoil.
Drawbacks are that this quirk does not give the holder the ability to nullify the blows, meaning that there is a limit to how much the holder can withstand.

So... Do you all like the idea? Should I write it?

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