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welcome to "Criminal Undercover Awards 2021"
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We are here to announce the winner and runner of the Park Jimin category... So fast right? Thanks to ur judges...who made their work fast....
Judges of this category: @AMELIE1318 & @_mytrueself_33
The books which are submitted are awesome in its own ways... If u didn't win then don't worry....learn from ur mistake and win next time...
Let's get to know the winners... Nervous right...ya me too...
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So first I will announce the runner hehe.. The runner in Park Jimin category is...
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Judge : @AMELIE1318 Book Title : A lie;love Username: savagejustlikesuga
Title: 7/10 I like how you put a semicolon in your title. But maybe put it as "A lie; a love" I don't know, maybe?
Cover: 7/10 It's a bit plain. Like there isn't any quote/subtitle inside. And also, I recommend you to put Jimin upright. Not landscape but portrait.
Blurb: 8/10 Loved how you started with a dialogue, then with the plot. Very nice.
First impression: 3/5 Nice way to start a story. Straight to the point, cut to the chase!! :)
Plot: 7/10 Common plot used but it had plot twists so that was nice.
Grammar: 8/10 No spelling mistakes and amazing words used. Though, you could use other kinds of words other than "says" or "said"
Punctuation: 9/10 Very good, no errors. However, there is one part. Try not to put an incomplete conversation in two separate paragraphs. eg: ".... (incomplete) (new paragraph) ...." I took a while to understand what you were trying to say. So just avoid that kind of use.
Character development: 8/10 They were developed quite well I must say.
Flow: 7/10 I loved the way you described each scene. The pace was just nice. But maybe make it a bit... faster?
