When it stops

while you were sleeping

I don't know if I totally suck ass at this whole writing thing but I'm gonna keep doing it for a while. Please tell me your opinions!

*its night time*
Janes POV
I'm so comfortable. It feels like I have never been this comfortable in my life.
I feel warm arms wrapped around me hugging me tightly. Without thinking about it I snuggled into the chest of the person holding me.
Then my curiosity and reality got the best of me.
I slowly open my eyes and jump at the sight
I was cuddling with Jeff.
I slowly moved out of the bed sliding out if his arms trying not to wake him.
I succeeded in getting out of bed with out waking him.
But before I could get my things and get out of the door I trip and fall on to the floor making a loud thud
Instantly waking him up.
I tried to get out the door before he got me but he was faster.
Jeff's POV
I grabbed Jane off the floor and put her on my bed
She wouldn't stop screaming
She thought I was trying to kill her, right there on my bed.
I faintly heard the creek of the floors.
I covered her mouth muffling the screams.
"No one knows your here" I whispered in her ear.
I heard more creeks from the floor boards.
"People are coming" I wispered again...
Before I could hide her, my bedroom door swung open and Ben and sally walk out of the shadow.
Who's she!!!!they yell out, waking the rest of the mansion
Janes POV
While he was distracted talking to those kids I managed to escape his grasp
I ran out the door passed the kids and all of the other people coming out of there rooms at the time...
Jeff's POV
Man she got away
She won't last long out there in the woods, I thought to myself
I ran past everyone and laughed
"I'll explain later"