When it stops

lets start at the beginning.

OK before I start I just want to say that not everything will be perfect and I would love your input on what to add and change!
JANES POV
Jeff and his family moved across the street from me. They were normal and nice people. Until the incident with Randy and his stupid friends. Randy had gotten into an altercation with Jeff and his brother before but this time Randy wanted revenge. Jeff was at a little kids party playing with the children and then Randy and his terrible friends jumped the fence and started to mess with Jeff. They pulled out knives and tried to stab him but he dodged them and fought back which just made Randy angrier than he already was. So angry in fact, that after he had Jeff on the ground he put gasoline on him and lit a match. He flicked it in Jeff's direction and ran away. Jeff was ablaze and screaming in pain. I was at a loss for words. I was frozen. Then I came to my senses and looked for a phone. I eventually found one and called for help. Then I ran to the basement and grabbed a fire extinguisher and ran to his house where he was burning alive I saw his mom and dad trying to put him out and... black. I can't remember anything after that. I woke up in a hospital bed, a nurse came in and told me that I passed out trying to put a boy that was on fire out. I blink a few times ,confused. Then I jotted up and asked her if that boy was okay. She reassured me that he was stable. My parents and Jeff's parents walked in holding cups of coffee and talking. Jeff's mother noticed that I was awake and said hello. My mother and father came rushing over to me hugging me, relived that I was up and okay. Jeffs mother smiled and told me what happened to Jeff. And that he was okay and that they know I tried to put the fire out. They thanked me and said that my family should come have dinner when Jeff gets out of the hospital. I nodded awkwardly. And looked over at my parents who said that having dinner would be wonderful. A week or two went by and Jeff was out of the hospital. I saw him only once and his skin looked like leather and it was very pale. His hair was long and black and it went down to his shoulders. It still gives me shivers. A few days after that lui came up to me at school and said get ready for that dinner tonight. I smiled back at him and nodded. I stayed after school that day to study in the library. By the time I got home it was 5:00. I walked into the house to see that no one was home. I walked into the kitchen and there was a note laying on the counter that said "having dinner come over when your ready" I dropped the note and stepped back. I ran to the living room window and peaked my head to see Jeff looking out the window covered in blood with a carved smile in his face and his eyes were surrounded by black circles. We made eye contact for a whole minute and then I dropped the curtain. I ran to the kitchen grabbed the biggest knife and slowly walked across the street gripping the knife so hard I thought I was going to snap it in half. I opened the door and I was knocked out. When i woke up I looked aroung to see where I was. The first thing I saw was my parents dead and their faces carved and Jeff's parents on the other side of the table with the same carved smile. I close my eyes and look away but I feel a hand grab my head and turn me so I was facing the corpses. I look up to see Jeff. "Don't they look beautiful?" He said. "Your going to look just as beautiful when im done!" He chuckled. I started to curse under my breath and then at him. Then he held his knife up to my neck. Tracing a smile on my face. I tried to jerk away from him but he kept my face steadily looking at him. I continued to curse at him . And he told me its not nice to yell at friends. He told me that its my turn to be beautiful. He walked out of the room and when he came back he was carrying some bleach and gasoline. He started pouring it on me. I begged and begged for him to stop but to no avail. He lit a match and shot it my way. I felt the flames tear at me and my flesh starting to melt off. The pain was unbearable. I blacked out. I woke up in a hospital bed, I was covered in bandages. I try to sit up but the pain was to strong so I stayed down. A few moments later a dark haired nurse walked in holding a package. She looked my way and smiled and said "oh your awake". "How long was I asleep?" I asked. " a few weeks" she replied. I sighed. I looked to see she was holding a package. "Is that mine" I asked her. "Umm yes" she said quietly. "Can I have it?" I asked angrily. She helped me sit up and I told her to leave the room. She did. I slowly but surely got the package open to see a bundle of items. The first thing I saw were these black roses and a card. I opened the card and read it. "Sorry I messed up on making you beautiful Janie! I put a mask in here to cover your face till you heal. And you left your knife at my house, that's in there too! Bye." I pulled out the flowers and saw a beautiful white mask with feminine black lips and black lace eyes. I dug further into the box and found an all black dress and black gloves. And my knife. That day I swore to kill Jeff the killer.