Galaxy Kookies ent.

Audition #25

Name: Park Min Arissa ( flawless_shawn )
Face: Lizzy park soo young from Orange Caramel
Age: 13
Band/Solo: Solo
Songwriting theme: Happy, Love, and occasionally dark and mysterious
Birthday: July 4
Personality: Happy, Outgoing, Funny, Crazy, Introverted, and Extroverted
Song name: Started with a Smile
Nationality: Korean

Song:

I was the new girl in town
The one who never had a frown
When I walk down the halls
Queue the applause
(Yeah right)

I didn't think I was anything special
Just an ordinary girl
And when I walked by you I knew I had no chance
But that didn't stop from making my stomach twirl

(Chorus)
I walked by you and you said hello
We had that conversation
But you had to go.
Maybe I did something wrong
But it only felt right

You called my name
Asked to hang for a while
In that moment I remembered
It all started with a smile (yeah)

Out of all those other girls you picked me
The most popular guy choosing geeky
And only then did I start believing in myself
When I could put that picture of you and me
On the shelf (yeah)

(Chorus)
I walked by you and you said hello
We had that conversation
But you had to go.
Maybe I did something wrong
But it only felt right

You called my name
Asked to hang for a while
In that moment I remembered
It all started with a smile (x2)

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Grammar and spelling: EXCELLENT
Extras (Background singing, Rhymes, etc): VERY GOOD
Sense: EXCELLENT

The only problem I have is line skipping. The tune couldn't flow out naturally, because the line was too long. The rest is fine. YOU PASS!

9/10