The Woods are the Safest Place

Authors note

Ok guys hi. First of all I just want to thank you for reading my book but I just want you to comment what I should improve and what you think Brad is hiding from Gemma.

Ok so I know why my chapters are really fucking short. I'm a student in secondary school and my English writing is definitely not the best not gonna lie. I miss out some detail and some of the story line doesn't make sense, so if you have any improvements or questions about the story just comment them and I will answer them (probably). Ok so when I am on here I'm barely writing, I'm usually reading or I'm just on different apps completely. My updates are late, yes I know, and that's usually because I either don't know what should happen next in the story or because I just can't be shitted to write. Again my English writing is as shit as can be, but this is just something for fun and to try and improve it. I need to work on vocab and detail to add to the story. That's probably why my chapters are so short actually. I'm trying to add more detail into the book that's why as you go a long the chapters get slightly longer. In the books I've read on here (fanfictions) the chapters are always long so I'm trying to get them like that. But they always have many ideas going on in the chapters even if it's just a filler.

So I might be adding some smut in the next chapter (chapter 6) coz I'm writing 5 right now. If you don't want smut to be just message me or skip the chapter. I'm also happy to say that I haven't received any hate on here. But I'm slightly upset as I don't think my story is going very far, as I'm spending quite a lot of time reading instead of writing. Oops. Please inbox me if you have any ideas of what should happen later on in the book or if I should delete the book entirely. If it's suggestions I will try and use them for later on, but I might not use all of.

Please tell people about my book. I know it's shit but I just want feedback that isn't from my friends. I want it from the readers. And if you haven't added this to your library, I don't blame you. I think I should just start writing fanfics or something. But please comment. I need constructive criticism. Again please tell people about this and please vote and comment.

Thanks.