Fancy Review shop 02 Book Title: Alluring Mess Username: AlienboyfriendTae
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Title: [5/5]
I like it as it suits well with the story and is unique.
Cover: [2/5]
It was so simple and I think you need to add creativity.
Blurb: [7/10]
You did a little touch to the plot while putting a juicy quote. I didn't found any spelling mistakes or punctuation mark errors. It's good so far and I think it can gain more readers. But it would be perfect you add more words then the length also is perfect.
Grammar and vocabulary: [13/15]
I found a few punctuation errors.
Ex:- In the intro part, you should close the brackets in Jimin's quote/caption.
You have a good vocabulary and it was the first impression for me.
Sense of the story: [9/10]
It was a bit confusing at first but you smoothly carry it to the way of art.
Plot: [12/15]
There were few plot holes that made me confuse around the female protagonist. But other than that the story made my curiosity level up one by one. From character development to the end you did appreciatable work.
Dialogue: [10/10]
Good, there is nothing to point out here.
Emotion: [10/10]
Emotions were perfectly shown around Leona and it gave another color to the story.
Writing style: [14/15]
You are quite good at this point and your amazing vocabulary makes it perfect.
Enjoyment: [4/5]
I really enjoyed it because your wording and the vibe you give to the reader is a good shot.
Extra, don't use Hyung elder brother when a girl talking. It should be Oppa.
Total: [86/100]
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Happy writing!
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