"Mmh" Malori huffed "I wish it was damn pouring."
The day was a day to behold....but not in a good way. The path was muddy, the sky was dark and cloudy, but one thing that sucked of them all...Malori couldn't get to the tower in time with all of this.
The mage never minded the rain but when it slowed her down from seeing her love and ruining her outfit, it was something to get mad about.
"WERES THAT DAMN MAGE" the queen yelled making all of the low level demons flee, she was already on 2 bottles of wine.
Vels perspective
"Why do I feel like this...this human, this human."
I start to feel---
Ima stop this right here, I gotta take a bit to learn a few things and some...other stuff, I forgot what I was going to say. This may take a few chapters to get with all the dialog, I just want to set up the science Of you could say, I could also use a few grammar tips when it comes to dialoge and any tips in general.
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Mage and demon queen
Romance....im trying to get better at writing lol, 3rd times a charm. I think I'm going to do were Malori just got back up in the tower and went to the princess after the radio only to come back unaware of the hero
