From Broken To Hero (Discontinued and being rewritten)

the sorting

"Potter"-speaking
'Dumblefuck'- thinking
§what§- parselentogue

3rd pov:

After the hat stop singing everyone politely claps. Professor Mcgonagall then starts to speak but Harry didn't full pay attention and kind let his mind wandered while making certain to not look at Dumbledore as he knew what he looked like from the trading card he got of him from his first chocolate frog wizard trading card. When Hermione was called Neville and Harry watched happily as she was sorted into Gryffindor with in no time. Harry again only really listened when Neville was called the gave his shoulder a quick reassuring squeeze before Neville went up. That hat went on Neville's head.

Hat-'Ahah a Longbottom aye let's see loyal yes that's good trait for a Hufflepuff a house of loyalty but I sense heart of true bravery which would good for Gryffindor'

Neville-' So-sorry but I'm not brave'

Hat-' Ah but you are Mr. Longbottom you see bravery does not mean you have no fear like people may think no true bravery is when your are afraid but even though you are you face it head on I see that deep inside you it is just waiting to be set free I see it because I am the great sortting hat I see deep in side people and place them where they can truly grow now I think the best place for you is' "GRYFFINDOR"

After the hat says this Neville springs up runs to Gryffindor table only to stop walk back with head down walking  to Professor Mcgonagall handing the hat before trudging to Gryffindor sitting by Hermione while many laugh at him. Harry then stands in group only really paying attention when Draco was call the hat didn't even touch him placing him in Slytherin he straut to with his house table with his chest puffed out.

Harry-'I swear he acting like a peacock'

Harry thoughts were interrupted when. Mcgonagall called his name as it was said he walk up silently as he hears murmuring he sits on the stool the hat is placed on his head last thing he saw was everyone staring before the hat dropped over his eyes stop by his nose keeping it from covering his whole face.

Hat-'ah welcome lo-Mr. Potter it's been a while since I sorted a Potter now let's see hear loyal to those he cares for ok not a bad mind you have a thirst for knowledge that is on par with Rowena Ravenclaw herself. Oh very ambition and cunning you wish to prove yourself oh but there's also a heart of true bravery but where to put you you would do good in Slytherin'

Hurry-'I rather stick with my friends if I can'

Hat-'oh are you sure alright then by the way before you go do not trust Albus, I would also go to Gringottes when you can, and get a book on Occlumency and Legilimency don't let the staff make direct I contact until you are descent with it to protect your mind young lord'

Harry-'wait what do you..'

Hat- *interrupt* "let it be Gryffindor" 'remember what I told you and Hogwarts will always help who asked good luck my lord'

With that the hat was taken off leaving Harry to rack his brain he did still hear the house of Gryffindor cheering with two ginger twins being loudest he just silently got off the stool walking to sit next to Hermione and an older ginger boy who seemed to be another Weasley across from him were the two older twin female gingers who was chanting we got Potter, we got Potter. Harry just hope these three aren't like there younger arse of a brother.

Harry pov:
I didn't really pay attention to the rest of the sorting and I vaguely listened to Dumbledore telling us the out of bounds area.

Harry- 'really man telling this many kids to not to go some place you. Of course you are going to get that selective few who will go and do it that like putting your food in your dogs line of sight and reach tell him not to eat it leave food unsupervised and come back and expecting the dog not to have eaten it'

After that that the feast appeared. Ravenclaw and Slytherin ate with well class manners. While most of Gryffindor ate with almost no manners while the Hufflepuff were like a mix in between. Many of my fellow Gryffindor at least had some manners while Ronald ate like a cave man talking with mouthful piling his plate. Seeing this I lost my appetite.

Harry-'gross he literally reminds me of Dudley he eats like him and from first encounter I say he most likely acts like him too if the didn't look so different I say Dudley was here just to continue my torment. I am lucky I am so used to not eating that I can go days hell even weeks with out and when I do eat it's small amounts. Hermione and Neville look at me alittle worriedly.

Hermione-"Harry are you alright you barely ate anything."

Neville-"yeah mate you should try to eat more"

Harry- "oh no I fine I never really one with a big appetite and besides I still full from my breakfast and all that candy from the train but also with that site *gestures to Cavemen Ron* I can't say I really have an appetite."

They both looked sceptical about my comment but just shrug it off. While continue to eat it's at this time I'd decided to pull out my notebook and one my fountain pens writing. After everyone done eating Dumbledore made an announcement and we all were escorted by our house prefects to our dorms. We followed our Prefect Percy Weasley. As we go up the stairs floating objects start whooshing around.

Percy-"Peaves stop and show your self"

At this the items drop to the floor and a ghost in a gesture out fit appears.

Peaves-"oooo looky looky I come across some eeky little firsties and ooooo a child of a marauder is among them what fun what fun hehe"

Percy-"Peaves knock it off don't and I will tell the Bloody barrian"

Peaves-*blows a raspberry before leaving flying off making sure to go low to make most first years duck*

Percy-" that was Peaves the bloody barrian seems to be the only one to get him to behave though I wish he listen to someone of authority"

Harry-'the way he said that he sound to up tight and everything must be perfect in place and like the type that won't bend nor break the rules even if they aren't right and who will always trust an authority figure even when warned not to so I will need to be careful as he may rat me out to Dumbledore'

We continue to Gryffindor tower Percy stop at a portrait with a fat lady on it she asked for the password.

Percy-"Lion's heart"

The portrait says enter before swinging open. When it does we see a door way that you need to up step and over a small step to enter into the common room.

Harry-'wow such an original password'

We all enter into the common room. Gathering infront of percy who tells us where to go.

Percy-"ok Gryffindor go up the first flight stairs is 1st years dorms girls first door on left boy same to right now it's been long day and you don't have classes until Monday as tomorrow Sunday you can do what you wish curfew is at 11p.m. so all Gryffindor must be in common room 1st and 2nd years are supposed to be in there bed at 9p.m. on school nights 10p.m. weekends 3rd-4th 10p.m. school nights 11p.m. on weekends 5th-7th year 11p.m. on school nights midnight on weekends of course tonight's an exception. Also to inform you breakfast does no start until 7a.m. ends at 8:50 a.m. and 1st class is at 9a.m.. Now off to bed night."

With that he walked away. All us first years went up stairs and go where we we were told to Neville and I bid good night to Hermione agreeing to wake up early to so we can hurry up to eat before walking around so we know where our classes are and and quickest way.