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PROLOGUE
LUMA POOLS
You glided through the anemone, taking every shortcut you could, you had heard the Moki talking about a so-called "Fowl presence".
You didn't care.
You thought as long you were underwater, you'd be safe.
You climbed into the cave of tidepools your tribe claimed as their nest.
You were all viewed as lazy by the other guardian spirits that lived in niwen, but you were just really peaceful.
''(y/n)!'' Your proclaimed mother called.
You jumped at the familiar voice calling your name, before letting your legs run through the flat part of the Tidepools to your cave.
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FanfictionI am not proud of this at all Not sure if fanfiction is the right genre but ae Both ori games are not mine, and were made by moon studios.
