Chapter 1(Edited)

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Grammatical and spelling errors ahead
If you won't mind,reading all of them again,I changed some scenes though, but won't force you😊

Nathalie and Gabriel we're best friends since elementary,they we're so close and nothing can make them apart

Nathalie:Gabe come sit.

Nathalie calls him and put the foods on the plate

Gabriel:you sure you're okay in here? This place is crowded with people

Nathalie:yes and the reason, is because of you

Gabriel:why me?

Nathalie:so that you'll get used to stay on a place with lot's of random people

Gabriel:you know how I hate people

Nathalie:Just eat Gabriel don't mind them
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*all cheering*

All students:congratulations!!!

Nathalie and Gabriel hugged each other

Nathalie:we finally did it!! We're done on our studies and we can be a fashion designer together!!

Gabriel:yes we finally did it!!
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Gabriel and nathalie go out for a dinner

....:here's your order ma'am and sir enjoy

Nathalie and Gabriel thanked the waiter

They were happy eating the dinner,and they were also talking about their future

Nathalie:and oh let me show you my sketch,this is the first dress I'll make someday

Nathalie:and oh let me show you my sketch,this is the first dress I'll make someday

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Gabriel:That's beautiful nath

Nathalie:thank you
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After the dinner they walked to head home

It was so silent, they were the only one walking down the streets,then Gabriel tries to talk about something

Gabriel:are you planning to have a boyfriend already? Since we're done in our college?

Nathalie looked at him

Nathalie looks back at the way

Nathalie:if there's someone who'll ask me

Gabriel:if someone will court you right now,will you accept him?

Nathalie:if he's a good guy then yes,why not

Gabriel goes in front of her that makes her stop

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