I'm getting poop brain on thinking whats going to happen next on this book It is really good I am also excited in writing and thinking whats going to happen next but I get all poop brain and not writing anything. Im trying to make a new story a better one than this here is a sneak peek and pls comment if you like it or if there is something wrong about it. I will try to finish this book as much as possible and try to make a better one next time :)) the next story is untitled so if you have any suggestions on what title i should write pls leave a comment or anything thank you so much.
Here it is .
I opened my eyes, they are still adjusting from the darkness before. In the middle of the dark room there is a street lamp glowing on top of me, then I checked my surroundings it was pitch black. I couldn't see anything. Then something popped infront of me. I could see blonde hair falling from her hood. She was wearing black jacket, pants and shoes. She was looking at the floor. Then I saw a shiny tear dropped from her face, she was crying. I want to see her face although I got the feeling I already know who she is. I was about to touch her and wanting so much to comfort her but something made me retreat my hand I don't kow what but I turn around and ran away. I dont even know where I am going I just kept on running it felt like it happened before. As I was running away I want to tell my body to turn back around and go to her but I wouldnt listen. I tripped and woke up to reality.