Love is tough ( Zayn and Harry love story

Hi guys this is my very first story so please giver advise about things.

Sabrina is a very independent girl until she moved to London. She went there to get a new life she was tired of her old town. She was sad to leave her best friends Thais, Olivia, Dnia,Ashely and Ngozi. Once she got there she though she was going to have a hard time since she was living by her self. Until one day she bumped into Zayn Malik and her world turned around.Hi guys this is my very first story I'm writing so some comments would be nice. And even some advice. Hope you enjoy the story.

Sabrina's Provo

I was lying in bed text one of my best friends Thais. We are really close you could call us sisters. Thais is a very pretty girl long black hair kinda tan skin in the winter but still pretty skinny and really flexible. Me I'm light or coming from Thais hazel nut. Dark brow eyes. Long blackish brownish hair. People call me slim but I sometimes agree but I never loved my legs aka my thighs. My stomach I like it was nice and flat with my belly button ring. I'm 19 Thais is 18. She was telling me about what happened at school. I hate school but I go to see my friends mostly. Teacher never like me I never raise my hand,don't talk only to friends so I get in trouble sometimes but hardly. Today I just didn't feel like going so I didn't. I live in stoughton,Boston ma it's a little town no one really knows I think. I finished texting Thais and started to pack my thing. School was almost over and I was moving to London. I asked if Thais wanted to come but she rather go back were she was born from which was brazil. I don't blame her from what she said its really fun over there but I always wanted to move to London. Once I finished which tick hours sense I tock brakes and played little games on my phone. I knew these last two day of school was going to be hopefully fun.