Fate Unlimited Blade Works x Madara Uchiha

Was it good enough?

Hey everyone

Can I get your opinon on what you think of chapter 3?

Do u think I made Madara passing good enough? And for Madara last words do you think it was good and bad?

Oh and I'm not writing itshar story, for I dont know how to write it. For the only thing I can think of how they became friends is buy having Ishtar tell Madara to pay her to be his friend.

But if you have any suggestions on how you would like me to write how Ishtar and Madara met and fell in love. Please inform me. I would really appreciate you opinons on the matter.