Naruto Evolved

So It Begins

Need To know
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1.)I own nothing except the armies
2.)this will be a harem Fanfic and it will have lemons don't like it well there are plenty other Fanfics out there
3.) this is for Jutsu's Oiroke no Jutsu
4.)this is for when it is mind talking time "sup"
5.) if you don't like this story please don't be mean and tell me that
6.)this is for demon talking "kit"
7.) This is for Eldar talking "YoUnG OnE"
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"Good job Menma and Naruko just keep at it" said Minato Namikaze along with his wife Kushina Uzumaki Namikaze they were speaking to there two five year old children one looked like a copy of Minato except he had red short hair that reached to his shoulders he wore baggy grey sweatpants with a blue shirt his name was Menma his Sister Naruko look like a clone of her mother but she wore a red shirt with red sweatpants she had long blonde hair they all looked like the prefect family but if you looked a little bit closer to there kitchen window you could see a small child his name is Naruto and he is also there child but he is also the village pariah the demon and a million other things you see Naruto and his siblings all have a piece of a demon in them the nine tailed fox demon his brother and sister got the power while he got the soul but instead of training him like them they forgot about him so in turn he isolated them Naruto hopped down from the window seal as his ' family ' came in

"hay tou-san guess what" said Naruko on the outside both menma and Naruko seem nice but the moment there parents turn and leave they start belittling Naruto and making fun of him so Naruto just learned to tune them out and ignore them every time Naruto turned away her and left without a word Naruko huffed as he left "why do you have to be like that tou-san maybe if you weren't you'd probably have friends" she said Naruto still ignored her and kept walking "don't mind him Naruko his just different leave him alone he'll never be like you" said her mother with a smile Naruto paused but only for a second then he just kept walking silently hating them all when he got to his room he closed the door locked it and sat down on his bed and brought both his legs to his chest and let the tears fall he didn't make a sound as they fell he just sat there and let them fall "why" he thought " why do they hate me what did i do am i nothing to them just a item in there house why kami answer me why" he just sat there and let them fall he soon caught a headache from crying and fell asleep

two hours-later

Naruto woke up in a sewer he could hear the sound of water as it dripped from the pipes he got up slightly woozy for some reason he looked down and saw water up to his ankles "villagers must have dragged me from my home and left me in a sewer" he thought he started exploring thinking "well they left me here might as well find a way out" as he walked he realized that this sewer was not just a sewer it wasn't cold or hot he didn't even feel the water at his ankles he knew something was wrong started to notice that the walls were starting to space out "hmmmm something big is up ahead" he thought he got into a nice jog when he came to a large gate "wow what in the-" before he could finish a malevolent voice commanded him"come closer" said the voice Naruto inched closer to the gate "closer boy closer" Naruto went closer to the gate when he was inches from the gate a giant orange red paw shot threw the gate Naruto just stood there "what.........in.........the........gods.......name"said Naruto not even phased by the giant claw to him nothing could put fear in him thinks to the villagers he expected a roar because of the claw but what he got was something unnatural "mawhahahahahahahahahahaaaaaahahaha i like you kid no fear in your eyes"

the laugh was strange and foreign but almost to Naruto "hey just who the heck are you" yelled Naruto"oh i'm just your tenant or prisoner the great kyubbi no Kitsune" said the now visible giant fox as it looked at Naruto with its giant red black slited eye the kyubbi saw something in Naruto something he hasn't seen since his making he saw anger pure hate and malice "you" said Naruto with venom in his voice "what-" before the kyubbi could finish massive killing intent brust forth from Naruto "you are why"said Naruto as the killing intent rose even more"what do you mea-"again before kyubbi could finish the intent rose even more "you it's all your fault!!!" kyubbi saw that the floor was breaking up something inside this kid was coming up and kyubbi had no earthly idea what it was "you bastard!!!!"

lighting shot down from the ceiling blinding the kyubbi and encasing Naruto in it while strange black white purple and orange Chakra came up from cracks in the floor "look kit hay kit quiet it hay!!" Yelled the kyubbi but Naruto was not listening the lighting stopped as the Chakra was swirling around Naruto tears stung his eyes as the Chakra stopped but kyubbi could of sworn he saw to giant creatures standing right behind the boy and he fell to his knees "why...why...why'd you have to attack" yelled Naruto "look kit it wasn't my fault"said the kyubbi "not your fault not your fault because of you my family and the whole village hates me because of you my life has been hell right down to the very last second" said Naruto "kit it wasn't my fault" yelled the Kitsune now he was intrigued this power was knew to him now maybe this time he won't be bored out of his mind

"then who oh mighty Kitsune lord of all foxes who uh whowas it huh who was it" yelled Naruto with rage in his eyes kyubbi looked at Naruto in rage now normally it would of made someone back down but no not Naruto his life s been hell and he conserved some answers so the fox could glare all he wanted but the kyubbi was impressed normally someone would of backed down but not Naruto he stood his ground and looked him square in the eye "Madara Uchiha he controlled me he made me attack your persish village he is the reason for you life being hell not me okay NOT ME!!" yelled the kyubbi"persish persish this village has made my life hell i swear by all the gods that Madara will die by my hand" said Naruto as the black and purple and white and orange Chakra swirled around him as the kyubbi looked in Naruto's eyes he saw pain a terrible pain of lonlyness and a pain of hate so then and there kyubbi made a vow to help Naruto for he may be a demon of the ninth circule but he'll be damn if he had a weak container

he smirked as he came up with a plan"hay kit lets make a deal""what kind of deal" asked Naruto as he raised his eyebrow questioningly "one where you leave this village kill Madara and have a good life" said the kyubbi "im listinng"said Naruto listing as good as he could he may be four but he knew a trick when he heard one what he didn't know though was that he would become very strong "how and what's in it for you" asked Naruto "simple when the time comes you must kill Madara I can't go back to hell knowing I was controlled by a mere mortal give me your word that you'll kill him and I'll help you to the end well until you die that is" he said with a maniacs smirk "hmmm what happens after I kill him" asked Naruto "simple I leave do you actually think some pitiful seal can hold me me a demon lord please I could leave when ever I want I just stay here for a vacation but now I have an acolyte who can kill a pest for me" he said Naruto raised an eyebrow at the word acolyte "YoU MeAn SlaVe RiGhT" said a voice it held great wisdom and power but also great malice "who is there"said Naruto

"It Is I YoUnG LiNg AnOtHeR PrIsOnEr Of YoUr MiNd" said the voice by now Naruto didn't want to know "w-w-w-who are you" he said with a shaky breath "My NaMe I HaVe MaNy BuT YoU MaY CaLl Me ElDaR Or BeTtEr YeT KrAkEn" it said with an air of power then the voice stepped into the light what Naruto saw could only be described in a horror movie or worse in a nightmare four eyes and four tentacles. Two of the tentacles start below the eyes while the other two emerge from the sides of the creature's head. The bottom two eyes are slightly larger than the top two. The Kraken's upper jaw is split in two, giving it's mouth an overall triangular shape. The foremost tentacles serve as the outside of the Kraken's upper jaws. The lower jaw is situated in between the four tentacles. The interior surface of the creature's foremost tentacles serve as its upper lips and they follow the split of the Kraken's mouth all the way up it's face between it's eyes. The Kraken's head is topped with four horns. (Need a pic look it up) Naruto looked right up at kraken as he towered over him and did the one thing anyone sane person would do and fainted when he did the kyubbi started laughing his big furry ass off
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Almost for got this if you guys like this please comment and favorite this if you don't please tell me what's wrong with it and I will change also this is a harem Fanfic I already picked some girls and the number it will and always will be at is four if you have any you want in it or any you want me to take out then tell me but here is the harem already
~~harem~~
Anko
Ino
Hinata
Hana
Kurenai
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There please tell me if its good or not