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(This takes place after they rebuild the 'house')

(TW: intrusive thoughts)

Nobody's POV

It was another day in the Madrigal's household. Everyone was so cheerful and happy except for one Madrigal. That Madrigal had been stuck in his room since the morning, nobody came to go check on him, no-one had asked if he wanted breakfast, it had seemed like no-one cared.

For the lonely boy who hadn't been checked on for most of the day, his thoughts had started to get to him for what had seemed like every passing minute.

The boys' name was Camilo, Camilo Madrigal, he had been laying in bed for the whole day, his mind flooding with different thoughts that he couldn't seem to shake.

Camilo's POV

'You'll never be enough for this family', 'why are you still trying you know no-one will care', 'How pathetic can you be to not remember what you look like??!?'

He was laying in his bed trying to not listen to his intrusive thoughts when then he heard a knock on his door. 'Hm.., I wonder who it is?' Camilo thought in a sad tone. He walked over to his door then opened it, to his surprise it was his older sister Dolores. "Are you alright?? I heard minor sobbing when I was walking by your door". "Yea I'm doing alright," Camilo said, but when he looked at Dolores's face he felt something wet around his cheeks. Camilo put his hand to his cheek to feel if he had anything on his face, he had felt some sort of wet substance 'was I crying?' He had thought to himself. 'ilo? Camilo? Camilo?! Are you alright? You spaced out..' Dolores had said worriedly, "uhm yea I'm doing great, just a lot in my mind y'know" Camilo said but finished his sentence with an awkward smirk. "Well alright if you say soo-" Dolores says suspiciously but then leaves.

Camilo then closed his door but had lost motivation to walk to his bed so his back slide down the door and he just sat there, with no emotion, he felt..empty

TO BE CONTINUED!!

(380 words)

(This was my first time writing something so I kinda expect it to be bad, but I'll try to update as soon as possible!)

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