Nichole's P.O.V.-
It was Friday night at Faith's treehouse our hangout. We were hanging out there until we graduated to college which is three months away. We were going to throw awesome parties one each day till graduation. It had 18 bedrooms each with its own bathroom and a master bed. The kitchen had 4 fridges and freezers full of food so did the cabinets. The stargazing room looked gigantic. The game room and the living room both were full of 98in flat screen TVs. The dance room was half the size of a football field and the dining room was half the size of the ballroom. The garden out back was 87 acres while the yard was 50 acres. The girls were setting up the decorations in the ballroom while the guys were getting snacks and drinks at the store.All the girls were sad except Skylar, whom we did not invite her, nor did we like her. She had been coming to the hangout when we were there it pissed us off cause 1) she was a bitch we didn't like ,and 2) she flirted with our boyfriends. She acts as if this treehouse is just a piece of wood. She doesn't know the history of this place this is where all of the break ups,arguments,romance,and fun happy times were there. Recently that year this was where Faith and Danny first kissed. This place meant the world to Faith and us.
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Okay well I'm new at this and this is my first time writing a book then letting people read it. I'm not exactly sure if it turned out ok but I would like you to comment on what you think .I would really like to get tips and pointers on what you think I could improve. If you don't like it please I don't mind constructive criticism but don't be rude about it I'd appreciate it. Thank you.