❁⊱〖𝕹𝖔𝖙𝖊 - 𝖀𝖕𝖉𝖆𝖙𝖊〗⊰❁

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Hello everyone!

I know there's only been two main chapters by now, though I'll be changing a few things. Not too much though.

There's just been a few plot holes I've noticed, so I'm going to be updating those.

To anyone who's already started reading, I suggest try rereading after I update, since I might add things on the next few chapters that are relevant to the updates.

But if you're feeling lazy, I'll be summarizing any changes I've made in this update note once I'm finished. I'll also add the original plots of the updated ones to show which has changed.

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Prologue - Unsolved Mystery

➡ Updates:

• The title is now "Unsolved Mystery".

• Nozomi is now a detective, though still has her part-time job as a mailwoman.

• Nozomi has a named boss, named Mana Takahashi.

• Hanae and her family's surname is now Shio, to fit with the "S" logo of the hotel.

• They don't go at a beach anymore, it's instead an attraction.

• The tickets in the envelope are now money sent from Mana, only for the cases.

• The only reason they went to the attraction is since Nozomi needed to solve two cases there, the other two only tagged along.

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➡ Original:

• The title was originally "Misfortune Vacation".

 • Nozomi originally worked as a waitress in the same restaurant Akina does, and was still a mailwoman.

• Nozomi didn't have a boss, well, a named one at least.

• Hanae and her family's original surname was Kyo.

• They originally booked a flight to a beach.

• There were originally tickets in the envelope, since Akina had originally just wanted to go on vacation with the Lekami siblings.

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➡ Sidenote:

I realized wanting to solve a case just for fun wasn't at all reasonable. They're also gonna be very dedicated to solve it, which wouldn't make sense, since they could just not solve it and go on with their vacation. I also gave Nozomi a somewhat detective-like mind, so I decided to make her a detective.

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Chapter 1 - Favourable Library

➡ Updates:

• Hanae's brother is now named, Chiyo Shio.

• A few lines have been changed and added to fit in with the detective plot.

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Not much has changed, only a few lines have been updated to fit with the plot. Other than that, a few things were just added. The chapter didn't have much to do with the original plot anyway, so not many updates were needed.

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EDIT

Sorry if it takes a while for the next few chapters to come out, school and stuff. I was only fast in publishing the other chapters since my school let us go on break for a week, health week. Break's finished now, but I'll do my best to publish the rest after I'm finished with my classes and schoolwork. I'm doing all I can to make a good schedule, but with how many things I have to do, that isn't going very well.

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