The Coffee Boy (Narry Lilo)

Chapter 6

Sorry for the long waits but I need more comments about my story to know if it is going in a good direction or if you guys would want me to add anything or take anything out. Anything really. But from now on I will be posting once a week until I start to get more comments. I want three comments to get the next chapter up sooner.

Also sorry about the American version of telling time if you are not from America.

Cj

***Louis' POV***

I was putting on my black coat and looking myself up and down in the mirror. I had to look perfect for Liam. He was going be down there at eight tonight and it was already 7:45 pm and I was freaking out inside but I was so excited I was shaking. Niall was laying in his bed listening to music.

I finally settled on keeping my dark blue jeans that were a little faded down the front of them with a tightly fitted white polo and a black leather jacket over that. I looked at my watch and it showed 7:50. I threw a pillow at Niall to get his attention.

"Oy! What?!" Niall yelled in frustration taking out his earphones.

"I'm leaving now on my date. Don't wait up. Ill try to be as quiet as I can when I come back in." I tried to sound as nonchalant as possible.

"Ooooooooh who is this mystery girl that you are dating now? I want to hear details later!" He teased. I shift in my stance and felt a little red burn in my cheeks.

"Ummm... Well... Actually Niall... I-it is... Liam, my date is with Liam. That guy at orientation." I looked at him waiting for his reaction.

"Oh... Well that's cool too! I want details when you come back either way." He said and gave me a smile after.

My watch read 7:58. Damn it was time for me to go. I started getting really anxious. All I wanted was for tonight to go perfectly. I couldn't imagine what he had planned but I just knew it was going to be perfect because it was him.

I felt myself getting more and more anxious as my feet dragged me down the hall. The hallway seemed to be longer than ever. When I finally reached the staircase I almost jumped down them I was sprinting so fast. I couldn't be more excite as i made my way to the door separating me from Liam. I was shaking with nervousness but I opened the door anyway.

I stepped out from the dark staircase and into the luminescent main room. I looked around and saw the usual kids rushing around to get to where they want to go along with the kids who were chatting away with their friends in the corner on the comfy couches placed around the single coffee table. But my eyes finally settled on the man I was looking for. Liam. He was just walking in through the front glass doors.

He was wearing an open navy jacket that i saw him wearing earlier, a tight black v-neck t-shirt showing off the muscles underneath, and lightly ripped dark blue jeans to go with it. He was walking over to me when he spotted me with that perfect grin that he had. my heart started to beat faster just knowing that he was smiling at me and walking over to me.

"Hey! How are you?" he said finally reaching where we stood earlier today. "Excited! What are we going to do?" I managed to say.

"Not much, but remember its a surprise! Just follow me." Liam grabbed my hand and we molded our hands together perfectly.

Walking down towards the doors Liam had just came from my heart began racing and my mind questioning every idea he could have come up with. Maybe a movie, a dinner, a walk, all three, none. I hadn't a clue but it was just getting dark outside and the crisp air made me cringe a but when I walked outside with him.

I wanted to ask him a million questions but he kept giving me a look that said "stay quiet until we get there" so stayed quiet. But soon enough we made it to the courtyard. This was not the way to any movie or fancy dinner I had in mind. But it was too cold to be out here and the breeze was more welcomed than feared. I looked at him and looked up into the night sky. It was crystal clear and beautiful. The stars all glowed brightly piercing the thick vail of space.

Wen I finally redirected my gaze down to Liam he was starring right at me with a big grin on his face. "So we are here. Do you like it?"

I couldn't really see much but the sky was beautiful so I was about to respond when my eyes looked at the ground. What I saw a small square blanket on the ground with a basket off to the side. I realized he wanted tonight to be a nice quiet picnic looking up into the stars and just getting to know each other better type a date. It was perfect.

I couldn't smile any wider when I made eye contact with him and sad "this is perfect."

"Good I'm glad you like. Now lets eat." He added that last part in after he heard my stomach growl. I hadn't eaten much today because of the nerves but now that those are mostly gone I felt the hunger stir inside me like an animal. I sat down on the soft silky blanket and eyed the basket. He pulled the basket over to us and sat opposite me on the other side of the basket. Opening the lid he pulled out a half of a sandwich with turkey lettuce and cheese as far as I I could see but that was enough to get me to smile. That was my favorite and I vaguely remember even telling him that.

"How did you remember?"

"When you like someone enough to want to impress them you just remember those types of things. Here."

He handed me my part of the sandwich and a water. I watched as he unwrapped the sandwich and began eating. He bit into his sandwich and chewed his food. The way his jaw line was portrayed in the moonlit skies. He was amazing to me. This whole date was perfect.

"Thank you." I said.

"For what?" He tilted his head just a little bit.

"For this whole night. For you. For everything. It's all perfect." I could keep from grinning and I just flung myself backwards onto the ground laying on my back. I just layer there with peace at mind starring right up at the clear beautiful starry night. My breathing relaxed and I felt myself completely calm down. It was nice. I heard a rustling and turned my head to the side. I saw Liam crawling around the blanket and stopped on the other side of me. He payed down next to me and we starred up at the sky together. I couldn't imagine it gets any better. His hands crawled itself over to mine and we interlocked out hands once again. We just laid there me like that for a bit and just enjoyed each others company. I tilted my head and look at his perfect head starring at the sky. He seemed to have sensed that I was looking at him because he turned his head to look into my eyes. He was so beautiful. I felt his long strong hand graze my soft cheek leaving goosebumps where it touched. I felt myself swoon for him even more than ever tonight. He looked deep into my eyes and I into his. He started to lean forward until his face was so close I could feel his breath on my face. He closed the gap and lightly and perfectly pecked my lips with his soft red ones. He held his lips on mine and slowly kept kissing me. I felt him separate a little only to trace his tongue on the bottom of my lips begging for entrance. I granted it to him and felt his tongue slip inside feeling everywhere it could. Our tongues slid and wrestled for dominance. I let him take control because he was already being so perfect. We continued snogging like this for while as the night drifted on.

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I walked out of the elevator with Liam right behind me. He held his around my waist leading me down the hall to my room. I was smiling so much from the night we just had. He was more perfect than I had ever realized. I could imagine tonight to have gone any better.

I got to my door and was nudged up against it. I looked into Liam's eyes and said, "tonight was perfect. Thank you so much!"

"I am glad you had fun Louis! It was perfect." Liam said with a smile formed on his face.

He kissed me one last time and said goodnight. He turned and walked down the hall. Once I saw that the elevator doors had closed I let my knees give. I slumped down against my door and just smiled. Tonight was just beyond perfect. He was the guy u had always wanted.

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Cj