Hey, guys! I planned to make a remake for this book. And... I really don't like the start of the story. And especially bringing in too friendly characters. It really gives me a hard time to give a really good story if it's all the characters are goo...
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Hold up. #5 in readerxchara...? The fact i never once mentioned Chara in the story just... Oh wait. Right. That's an achievement tho.
Your POV
*You and Frisk decided to climb the mountain and Frisk was oddly ignoring you...
"Frisk?" You called to her while she's a bit higher than you "Are we just gonna ignore what happened last night?" You tried to gain her attention.
*Frisk stops climbing to the path. She looks at you with this red painted face.
(Did she trip?!)
"Frisk! Did you trip?!" You shouted to her. "Or did something happen?!" You shouted again. Very worried
"I-i didn't! Just keep climbing! Don't mind me!" Frisk shouted back, why was she stuttering?
(Could... Is her foot hurting?)
"Frisk! Is your foot hurting?!" You worriedly hurried to her "I'm coming up there now!"
"I-it's not! It's something else!" You see Frisk's face a bit red. But, she just continued climbing up
*You caught up to her and she sat on the ground while you checked her foot. Nothing was wrong with it... And the bandage wasn't really touched
"S-see? Told you" Frisk smirks "You're too worried and concerned" Frisk smiled at you
"You can never be too worried or concerned, Princess. Trust me, it's better be safe than sorry" You said and you poked her cheek. And she puffed her cheeks on purpose and giggled after. You chuckled as well "Cute" You said quietly
"We've been climbing for like... 15 minutes now, and how tall is this mountain even? It's so hard to get up. But, it's close so we can take a break" Frisk lays down on the ground. Surprisingly, the ground was very clean and smooth well trimmed.
*You laid down beside her as well. Looking at the blue sky, and the sun, not really bothering since it's windy.
"I wonder if the cave is blocked..." You muttered "But, the authorities said that it IS blocked. For some reason, this mountain park is open... For what reason exactly...?" You kept muttering as Frisk gave you a really concerned and worried look
"Are you okay? You're kinda looking too serious" Frisk touches your face "Is something bothering you?" She moves closer "You can tell me. I can help" Frisk smiled. You blushed
"Y-yeah, nothing is wrong. Just thinking if i set the traps around the house" You spoke sarcastically
"Oh, please. You don't have traps" Frisk chuckled "And i know that"
"That you know of, Frisko." You smirked. Frisk quickly looked at you
"No way" Frisk gasps jokingly
"Yes way, jose" You said and the both of you bursted laughing like some birds flying in the sky chasing eachother. "This is fun" You genuinely said
