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Your POV
*It has been 6 hours since you and Frisk fell into the underground. You are now in Toriel's house. You still don't trust her, but she's slowly gaining it as you both talk about things. She really cares for strangers... Something about the word "Kid" triggers something inside her. So you didn't bring it up whenever you talk with her.
"Fuck..."
*You are laying on your bed. Beside Frisk, she's still asleep. You're slowly getting... Sleepy. And...
"Hope i won't die tomorrow"
*You closed your eyes and let the tiredness consume you. The darkness swallowing up your whole vision, and you let it be...
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<You can guess who appears>
??? POV
"Suspicious.... Hm. How come i'm alive? Wait no. I'm not. I guess i'm like a ghost. And this two idiots in MY BED. Are sleeping so peacefully. So cute. I wonder what'll happen if i try to phase to one of them."
*I reached for the boy and i got sucked in?!
"W-wha- WHAT THE HELL IS THIS?!"
*I desperately pulled my hand back. But to no luck. I couldn't, and i was suddenly in a black... Eerie and creepy place. And i see... Someone.
Your POV
*You woke up in a black... Eerie and scary place. And you see... Someone.
<See what i did there>
"Is someone there? Or is this another one of my Deja Vu dreams?" You asked while you rubbed your eyes. "I'm still sleepy"
"You... You can see me?" Someone spoke. Surprising you and then you stood up "That's strange. I tried interacting with other monsters and somehow you... Can see me?" The figure tilted it's head while it floated slowly to you. Slowly revealing itself...
"a... Girl?!" You surprisingly yelled and someone the Girl looked surprised by you too. "What's a girl doing here?!" You complained and started looking at her. You noticed how her shirt was torn and her short, short jeans... A bit of cuts in it. And her black stockings... You started blushing
"Stop staring at me you creep" The girl covered her body
"I'm not!" You looked away "Who dresses like that anyways" You said quietly
"Anyways. Did you do this?" The girl looked around
"I absolutely didn't. I would never tore someone's clothes, Especially if it's a girl!" You said defending yourself
"I meant the place! Idiot!" The girl yelled. She sighed "Did you create this?" She folds her arms
"Of course not! This day has been the most craziest!" You walked to her and then you looked up at her. While she looked down at you. "And let me guess."
"This can't be any worse right?" You both said at the same time and then you both looked surprised
"Have we met... Before?" You both asked
(This girl...)
"Ok, stop." The girl said and you did
*The girl sighed and she sat down.
"What's your name?" The girl asked
"Hm?" You looked at her
"Your... Name?" The girl looked away
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Never Ending Tale (Remake)
FanfictionHey, guys! I planned to make a remake for this book. And... I really don't like the start of the story. And especially bringing in too friendly characters. It really gives me a hard time to give a really good story if it's all the characters are goo...
