She doesn't remember me. (A BajanCanadian Fanfic)

Chapter 18. What happened? *AND A HUGE UPDATE*

*Madi’s P.O.V*

“There’s only one answer” Asher said.

Then I heard a gunshot, Asher fell to the ground.

“M-madilyn” My dad said running towards me.

“W-who a-are you?” I stuttered backing towards the wall.

“Madilyn I’m your father.” he said.

I shook my head.

“N-no your not.” I said.

“Madi.” Some boy said walking in the building

“Who’s that?” I asked.

“Madi. We’re taking you to the hospital.” The older man said picking me up.

*30 minutes later*

“Madilyn, What happened?” The nurse asked

“She doesn’t remember anything.” The older man said.

“Mr. Summers. Will she be o-?” The younger one asked

“Mitch. Why don’t you go home. She’ll be alright.” The older one said

*Madi’s Dad’s P.O.V*

“Mr. Summers, Was there any sort of loud noises near heard?” The nurse asked

“Uh, Yeah, There was a gunshot.” I said

“Ever since she had that car accident, last summer Her mind reacts to loud noises. Causing her to lose some of her memory. Do you know who made the gunshot?” The nurse asked.

“Uh.” I couldn’t lose Madi, or Max. “No, Ma’am”

“Okay. We’ll keep her overnight. To see how she’s doing. Is that alright?”

“Yeah.” I said walking out of the building

*Madi’s P.O.V*

“Madi.” Some kid said walking into the room.

“Who are you?” I asked fiddling with my thumbs

“I’m Jerome?” He said giving me a confused look.

“I’m Madi” I smiled.

“Yeah, I know who you are.” he said.

“How?” I asked.

“We’ve known each other for years Madi. You’re just going through a lot.” he said.

“Oh okay” I smiled watching him sit down on the couch.

I layed on the hospital bed and sighed.

“Madi?” He asked

“Yeah?” I said turning my head towards him.

“Can I asked you something?” He said

“Is it wrong to kiss a girl? That you’ve had a crush on, since forever. Yet, she just broke up with her boyfriend?” He asked looking at me.

“I guess. Depends. How long was the breakup?” I laughed silently

“30 minutes?” He looked confused

“Jerome. Is there something you’re not telling me?” I asked sitting up

“No” He smiled

I yawned and laid down.

*Jerome’s P.O.V*

Madi yawned and laid down. I saw her drifting to sleep. She was so cute when she was sleeping. I smiled and kissed her cheek.

“Goodnight Madi.” I whispered walking out of the room.

I closed the door quietly walking into the waiting room, trying to find Mr. Summers.

“Aceti.” Someone said behind me. I stopped and turned around.

“Yeah?” I asked

“Is she okay?” Madi’s dad asked

“She’s sleeping.” I smiled

“Oh.” he said nervously scratching the back of his neck

“Is there something you’re hiding, Mr. Summers?” I asked.

“If you tell anyone, lets just say...you’re gonna regret it.” he said. I swallowed hard.

“uh. Okay.” I said.

“I-I killed Asher.” he stuttered.

“What?!” I gasped.

“Shut up.” he whispered loudly looking back at Madi’s room.

“What are you going to do? You’ll be put in jail.

He shrugged his shoulders. “This is our secret.” he said walking away.

I was confused. Mr. Summers killed Asher.

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WE ARE BACKKK! AND WE ARE STARTING TO REWRITE IT!!!! YAYYYYYY.

I am so happy, for bringing this back. And plus, if we don't finish this book before May 19th (Graduation) We are screwed. But, we don't think there will be a sequel. Just because of the time. Maybe we can do a little 10 page short story, over summer. But, For right now. There will be no signs of a sequel. But we literally have five chapters left. Five. We started this story on a google document, getting our thoughts and stuff. It was an orrignal short story, due for class. But, I brought it into a 30 chapter book. In our google document we are at almost 120 pages! 120 pages. Wow.

*** But, i'm done with my typing nonsense!!

I hope you have a wonderfull Night/Morning/Evening.

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