Chapter one- a life saver

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~I'm not that good with punctuation so please be patient with me~

3rd person I think
"Maybe it would look cool if I incorporated Enderman into the design of the bridge" lizzie thought  "ok let's get you out of the boat sir" lizzie said with a excited tone of voice.

The Enderman attacked the pink haired girl injuring her delicate wing and knocking her of the bridge, thankfully she was holding a pickaxe, and just barely caught the edge of the bridge with the curved tool.

she let out a loud shriek "shit" lizzie thought is this the end her wing was to damaged to fly and she was weighed down from the building materials and she couldn't let go of the pickaxe to get a hand up. she screamed again while tears started to build up in her azure eyes.

she heard footsteps on the bridge and then a masculine voice say "hello, is anyone there" "YES IM OVER HERE PLEASE HELP" lizzie shouted. the floran heard more footsteps run towards her she looked up and saw the familar face of her friend oli with his brown eyes with a shine of purple, fluffy dirty brown hair and a quite concerned look on his face. "here give me your- um.." the enderman boy started but stopped when he realized that she can't let go of the pick. he grabbed her forearm and struggled but managed to pulled her up. Once lizzies full body was back up on the platform the diamond pickaxe fell forever into the void. 

"thanks Oli"  Floran said. "no problem but uhh sorry about the pickaxe" the taller boy said. "eh dont worry about it i can make another one, probably... but um what are you doing here?" Lizzie struggled.

"We can talk about that later. Do you have a shelter or house I could stay in for the next i don't know... forever" Oli said with a serious yet joking tone "I'm to lazy to build one" Oli stated and laughed under his breath

"I mean you did just save my life so alright, it gets kinda lonely in the end anyway" lizzie said grabbing Oli's hand and tried to drag him to her home but before she could "woah Liz what happened to your wing" Oli asked looking at lizzie's torn wing "what do you mean? lizzie asked confused "your wing its, torn" as soon as oli said that lizzie turned to look at her wing to see it was indeed torn. there was a rip running through the mid section of her wing she could barley even feel it because of the adrenaline tears started running down lizzies cheeks as the pain caught up with her 

oli almost immediately took off his jacket and wiped lizzies tears and pulled her into a hug. oli pulled a healing potion out of his bag he knew it wouldn't do much all it could do in this case was numb the pain and stop whatever bleeding there was on the rest of her body. he gave it to the older who immently took it after a few seconds a pink glow emits from the wounds on lizzies body and you could see lizzies face changed as the pain was relieved and she let out a little sigh in relief. 

"lets go to my place before anything else bad can happen" lizzie said "what about your wing" the taller asked worried "oh uh ill bandage it when we go back to my place" lizzie remarked while grabbing oli's hand for the second time and dragging him off to her house

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