im writing.

Exile but positive discduo bc thats what i like

Y'know, Dream." Tommy fiddles with his hands nervously. "I'm not so sure about you taking me somewhere 'secret'. You know, after the... disc... thing..."

Dream chuckles but continues facing away from Tommy. "Oh, Tommy, you're so silly to think that I would ever hurt you." His slithery voice runs shivers down Tommy's back. Something says Dream's words mean nothing here.

Tommy wants to go home. Or really, anywhere away from Dream. Every sentence he says feels unhinged and malicious, like he's talking to a sentient animal, not another person.

Where would he even go? It's not like he has any set home.

The boat knocks and creaks loudly, Tommy looks up, and then at Dream, who is finally looking at him directly. The eyes of his mask dig into Tommy, and he can feel them looking him up and down. Like a predator looking over its prey.

"C'mon Tommy. Wouldn't want to be left behind, now would you?" Dream cocks his head to the side. "Unless..?"

"Nono, Dream. I'm coming." Tommy sits up and dusts off his pants.

"Lighten up a bit, Tommy! It's not like you've been kidnapped!"

May as well be, considering that it's you. Tommy is filled with spite. Because that's how Tommy works.

They walk up the hill, and over to a (very obviously well trodden) spot.

Disgusting old evil ugly stupid b-

"Tommy. Tommy. Are you listening." Dream snaps his fingers in front of Tommy's face. "You know we're gonna have to fix that, right Tommy?"

Tommy scrunches up his face. "I don't need to fix anything about myself."

"Tommy, you're very, very wrong. Why do you think you were put in exile?"

"..."

"You were wrong, Tommy. Over and over and over. Hence why I have taken it upon myself to reform you."

Tommy stands up at the word reform. "You're not going to reform me! I am fine the way I am and don't need any of this 'reformation'!"

Dream clicks his tongue. "Sit down Tommy, it's not like we're starting now. But, even so, you need to fix your attitude." Tommy opens his mouth to say something, but is quickly cut off. "Now, Tommy."

"Okay Dream."

"That's good, Tommy. Now, you should get some rest. Wouldn't want to be tired for tomorrow's reformation, would you?"

Tommy tries to say something again, but Dream walks up to him and puts his hand on Tommy's mouth. Tommy glares at him.

"Sleep well, Tommy."

Dream steps back before turning around and walking off, leaving Tommy to find wherever he's supposed to sleep.

Probably won't end up sleeping anyway, with that creature on this —- hole of an island with me.

(im sorry yall i try n keep my content family friendly but tommy isnt a very friendly person)

After finally finding an actually sizable tent with a note very obviously written by Dream. The first thing Tommy does with it is rip it up and then eat the pieces.

After standing in spite for what felt like hours (it was actually five minutes) he finally lies down and sits in his thoughts. It doesn't last long though, because sleep beckons him into the dreamscape.

—--

"Oh, Tommy. You overslept."

Tommy blinks the sleep out of his eyes. Dream is standing basically atop him, and the entirety of Tommy's vision is obscured by that stupid smile on his mask. Tommy immediately kicks Dream off him and then sits up.

"Tommy! That's not very kind of you." Dream gets up and walks over to Tommy. "We're gonna fix that today, I think."

"Dream, I said that I don't need to be fixed!"

"Well, not fixed. It's more like... reworked. Because you can't be fixed, Tommy."

Nice way to start a new day, I guess?

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im trying to make it positive bro it never occurred to me that it would actually be really hard to make something really negative at least kind of positive- 

anyway i'll try to make it positive next chapter-