Chapter 4: Under My Control

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Some days have passed, Marx and Magolor were in Raisin ruins, a place isolated enough for final bosses to train

Marx: So? Are you ready?

Magolor looked at the crown, and then Marx

Magolor: Yeah, I'm ready!

Magolor took a deep breath... And then put the Master Crown on his head, causing him to transform in his crowned cool form

Marx: How does it feel?

Magolor: I can handle it... It's not as strong as the last time

Marx: Good to hear! Try to attack me

Magolor: Are you sure?

Marx: Come on! Do you even know how to train?!

Magolor: Yeah, I know what to do...

Magolor threw a ball of energy to Marx... Missing him

Marx: Umm... Good aim, pal!

Magolor: Oh, shut up! It's WAY harder than you think

Magolor threw other energy balls to Marx, some of them hit! But obviously, he blocked them easily

Marx: Nice! Now let's try to do an actual fight

Magolor: Let's do this!

MEANWHILE (I'm not good at making fight scenes, forgive me)

Meta knight was heading to the Lor, and then knocked at the door

Meta knight: Magolor, are you here? I need to talk to y-

The door opened, looks like Magolor forgot to lock the Lor

Meta knight: Magolor? Huh, looks like it's empty...

Meta knight decided to look around the Lor, until he noticed something...

Meta knight: The crown isn't here, Magolor neither...

His eyes turned green

Meta knight: I'm honestly worried, I wonder if Kirby's ok...

MEANWHILE-AGAIN

Taranza and Susie were playing with a Nintendo Switch

Taranza: Too bad Magolor is not playing with us...

Susie: You heard him, he's training with Marx

Taranza: Tell me Susie, do you even trust that "Marx"?

Susie: Not really, but I don't want to act like Meta knight acted...

Taranza: You're right tho

Susie: I'm honestly worried... What would happen if Kirby finds out Magolor is using the crown-

Taranza: TAKE THAT

(Our favorite spooder did a pro gamer move)

Susie: H-hey! I wasn't paying attention!

Taranza: Too bad!

MEANWHILE-FOR-THE-THIRD-TIME

Magolor: Huff... That was harder than I thought

Magolor took off the crown

Marx: We did good job for today!

Magolor: You know... There's something that surprises me in you

Marx: mhm?

Magolor: You never has been this nice to me

Marx: Is just that since you and your friends are having some trust issues I thought it was nice to help my best friend!

Magolor: Huh... Is not like you're trying to get something from this actions, right?

Marx: Do you think I'm not someone to trust, Mags? *Fake innocent face*

Magolor: I was just kidding, pal

MEANWHILE-SORRY-FOR-SPAMMING-THE-MEANWHILE-IN-THIS-CHAPTER

Meta knight rushed in the castle: DEDEDE

DDD: Huh? What is it Meta?

Meta knight: Magolor disappeared with the crown!

DDD: Are you sure?

Meta knight: I'm sure enough he's plotting something!

Kirby: Poyo?

Meta knight: Don't worry Kirby, even if I told you he wasn't someone to trust...

Kirby is determinate to believe Magolor is a good guy and he ran out of the castle to find him

Meta knight: Kirby? Where are you-

DDD: Leave him alone Meta, if is a kirby's problem you stay out of it

Meta knight: Hm... Fine

Magolor was heading to the Lor with Marx

Magolor: Tomorrow I want to try some other attacks

Marx: Well, you did some progress today and-

Kirby: P o y o

Magolor: Hm? Oh, hey kirby!

Kirby was surprised to find Marx too

Kirby: Poyoyoyo?

Magolor: We and Marx just went training for a while, do you need something?

Kirby almost noticed the crown, but Magolor hided it quickly in the cape

Kirby: Hmm...

Magolor, sweating under his hood: Umm... I think Meta knight has some chocolate left on the Halberd...!

Kirby: Poyo!

Kirby then proceeded to fly to the Halberd

Magolor: Phew... That was close

Marx: OH, such an evil lie to you old pal Kirby! How could you do such a thing, Magolor?

Magolor: Funny like always...

(The End
Of the chapter, this was harder to make, sorry for all the "meanwhile" but I need some time to get more creative, see you soon!)

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