i wrote this one differently. yup.
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Knocking on the gate
of hell, she froze.
Impatiently, she would wait.
What happened? No one knows.
Colors bursting, so boldly
the showed the world coldly.
Walking an endless path
to where we started;
the fork in the road hath
been where we parted.
Showing a flaw to which
you cannot mend with a stitch.
Unbroken, but bound into
a dream of the worst kind,
I am tied to none other than you.
We are blind.
Try to see me.
Try to reach me.
Breathe with me
so restlessly
as we sleep.
