I have a question .3.

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If I sat down and re-edit this fanfic, fix some stuff, add some stuff, take some stuff out. Would you guys like that? I am finally back into my writing kick and I get daily notifications about this fic. And I am slightly embarrassed of it's existence. I am nearing 23 and I think it's time I sat down and essentially rewrote it per chapter. More dialogue, more detail, a little less cringy. Hmm give me some thoughts? Some opinions. I really wrote this when I was 18, in some really really weird times. And let's be honest. Them smut scenes need some upgrading. The whole story needs some upgrading and I feel like some of it has a bit of a creep factor. Just gonna fix it make things better. Would this be okay with you all? 

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