¨HEY! Montresor, let's get this party started!¨, he said excitedly. He looked around. ¨Is something wrong?¨, I asked him. ¨Yeah! Where is the woman that you said that would be here?¨, he said laughing. ¨They said that they couldn't come. I apologize for that.¨, I told him. But in reality, I told them that they could go to my mansion and get as many jewelry as they wanted. After a few drinks, Fortunato started to ¨joke¨ about messed up stuff he has been wanting to do with MY Elena. That made my blood boil even more. ¨Fortunato, what if I killed you tonight? How will you react?¨, I said jokingly. He looked at me weirdly and said, ¨W-Why would you try to kill me? And I would try to run away and report you to the police.¨ I told him, ¨I don't know. I just wanted to talk like we used to. Anyways, I need to go get some more wood for the fire.¨ I grabbed the chainsaw, knife, and rope from behind the trees. Before I went back with him, I grabbed some wood and hid the knife and rope in my oversized jacket and the chainsaw in a nearby bush. ¨Im back! Today is a very cold day, huh?¨, I said in a friendly manner. ¨Yeah. Haha! Anyways, Elena would be such a hot and cute wife. Imagine her in your bed an-¨, he said as I started to approach him as I punched him in his face. ¨You NEED TO STOP TALKING ABOUT ELENA AS IF SHE WAS THAT KIND OF PERSON! YOU NEED TO LEARN HOW TO RESPECT HER! YOU LITTLE IDIOT¨, I said as I grabbed my knife. I started to stab him in his leg. ¨WHAT THE HELL MONTRESOR!¨, he said as he tried to get up. I started to keep on stabbing on his other leg, so that he won't be able to run away. I started to laugh, ¨Not so tough now, huh? You really thought I wanted to be friends with someone who hurt Elena? Hahaha!¨, I said as I showed the knife closer to his throat. ¨P-Please! I beg you! Don't hurt me! I will do anything! Y-You want money? I have money! Please, don't hurt me!¨, he said as he was sobbing for his life. ¨Hmmm....How about? NO! I don't want money! I want to see you feel THE SAME PAIN I FELT!¨, I said I stabbed his hands. ¨AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!¨, he yelled. ¨Shhhhhhhhhh! Don't be to loud. You don't want to make me slaughter your throat, right?" I told him in a insane voice. I started to the rope and tied his hands together and started to cut out my name on both of his arms. "URRRRRRRRRGHHHHHHHHHHH! Please! Stop! I promise I will never do that ever, ever, ever again!", he cried. I was about to finish the last step, which was to stab him in his heart then using the chainsaw to break his body parts into small pieces. Then I would of feeding it to the dogs to erase the evidence. But I heard...Elena's voice. "W-What on earth! M-Montresor w-what did you do?", she said as her eyes widen as she approached us. "E-Elena!....", I said as I tried to hide the knife. "I-I can explain! W-We were just jo-", I stammered my words, till Elena interrupted me. "A JOKE?!? HOW IS THIS A JOKE?", she said. I tried to grab her, but she yelled out, "DON'T TOUCH ME! LOOK WHAT YOU DID! I CAME BACK FROM LONDON TO SEE YOU, BUT INSTEAD, I COME BACK AND FIND WOMAN IN YOUR MANSION. AND THEN THIS! W-What happened to the Montresor that I knew?", she said with tears in her eyes. She untied Fortunato and told him, "H-Hey. Fortunato, can you stand up?" He replied in a terrified voice, "N-No I can't stand up. T-Thank you, Elena." It broke my heart that...I was the one who hurt Elena. "I-I am sorry Montresor....I called the police before I came here. I-I am sorry.....", she said in a weak voice. "E-Elena! ELENA! PLEASE! I AM SORRY! I JUST WANTED TO MAKE HIM FEEL HOW I FELT! E-Elena! ELENA!!!", I yelled and broke down to my knees as I saw her walk away. Her eyes didn't shine like they used to.
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The Cask of Amontillado (My Version
Short StoryThis is the assignment that I did in class and we were supposed to rewrite the story. But I took way too into it and mostly changed a lot of the story.
