I hated the ending of Naagin 5, as did all of you, so I decided to create my own version of the ending. This is just a teaser. I'm still continuing my other stories as well. This part will be following the planets/comets blasting on earth but Veer and Bani will be saved by the ghandak stone. Now they are home and you will see what happens next :)
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Bani came out of the shower and looked around the room smiling and thanking her Bholenaath, and Veer's precious ghandak stone, for saving them just hours before. As they hugged each other, cried, and promised each other to meet again in the afterlife they thought it was surely the end. It wasn't until the red light of the ghandak appeared above the sky and froze the planets and comets keeping them from crashing that Veer and Bani realized they had been saved. Surprisingly Balwant ran up to Bani first and gave her a big hug and reprimanded Veer for bringing such danger on her. When they got home they had a big family meeting, made amends, and it was revealed that in fact Ponky and Daksh had nothing to do with Noor's death after all. Yes they teased her, but it was Jai who used his powers to make Bani believe they killed her. The family had caught Jai and held him captive as he told everyone the truth. Working with Mayuri and Shukla, killing Monil, trying time and time again to kill Veer and Bani, and lying about Veer and his family's involvement in Noor's murder. As an aadhinaagin Bani banished him from the Naagin kingdom and turned him into a human again. He ran away and promised to never intervene in their matters ever again. When Bani nudged Veer to tell everyone the good news about her pregnancy he blushed a bit and shook his head like a shy bride. Finally, after five minutes of glaring at him and piercing his arm with her nails, she gave up and told everyone herself. They were all over the moon. Veer had to get his dad to sit down and have a few sips of water before he started running around the house again making sure everything is baby safe and started making arrangements for a grand party with all the cheels and naag lok invited.
Veeranshu? Kaha gaya yeh ladka...abhi toh achi tarrah se main iske saath ladh bhi nahi paayi. Bani fumed and threw her towel on Veer's side of the bed. If he could make a mess of her side why couldn't she do the same to him? She sat down on the bed and gently combed her wet hair, making sure to go easy on the tangles this time. Yesterday she was so pissed at Veer with his memory loss that she ended up ripping so many hairs out. Bani groaned and picked up the towel now and put it up to dry on the shower door. No matter how hard she tried she couldn't be like him. For starters, she was a total neat freak, and she also didn't want him to have to sleep on a damp pillow. She cared about him too much and hated the thought of him having a sleepless night or his beautiful skin breaking out. Seriously where is he? Abhi abhi yaadash vaapis aayi aur maafi maangne ke vajaay pattha nahi kahaan ghoom firr raha hoga. Aur usne toh muje ek kiss bhi nahi diyi achi tarrah se...Pakka Ponky aur Daksh ke saath neeche- Before she could even finish her sentence Veer came in with a bowl and glass of hot milk. He put them down on the nightstand and ran over to the walk-in closet, completely ignoring Bani as she stood there in her pale purple nightdress, naked face, and wet tresses dripping down her supple chest. Veer? Veer kya karr kya rahe ho? Veer? Hello...main tumse bhaat karr rahi hoon. She called out to him. Veer came back out with a heated blanket which he bought her when she first started complaining about him keeping the AC on at night and slightly glared at her. Shhh. Bani muje bauhat khaam hai...He turned away to the bathroom but then stopped and turned back around halfway. Ek minute...yeh tumaare bhaal...sweetheart...tumaare kapde... He opened his mouth slightly and Bani blushed as he looked at her head to toe. Even though she was mad at him she got butterflies in her stomach just thinking about how attractive he found her. Nobody could make her feel the way he does.
Seriously Bani? Who washes their hair at night? Aur yeh...yeh kapde...din parr din tumaari yeh nighties shotti hoti jaa rahi hai...ek minute. Bani looked down at her clothes and then at the water dripping onto her feet. Veeranshu...tum bhaat ko badlo matth. I need to yell at you...poore theen dino ke liye yeh tumaara yaadash khone vaala drama chall- Veer suddenly threw a fleece sweater and pair of pajamas at her. He snapped his fingers and said Challo. Go change right now. Aur achi tarrah se apne bhaalon ko blow dry karna...Ha ha muje pattha hai your blow dryer sucks. Main nayaah kareedh loonga. Go. Before Bani could refuse Veer had pushed her inside the bathroom. As she paced back and forth in there she thought to go out as she was before but looked at the outfit he chose and melted. It had her favourite animal, panda bears, all over it and the top even had her initials. How could she say no to such a cute gesture? Bani came out of the bathroom and sat down on her side of the bed and smiled at Veer as he sat down next to her and pulled the heated blanket over her cold body. She gently kissed his cheek as a thank you but he frowned and reached over her to grab the bowl of kichdi. Moo kolo. Iske bhaad gharam haldi vaala doodh bhi peena hai. Aur fir hum todha meditation karenga aur fir sona hai. You need at least eight hours of sleep. Okay sweetheart? He lectured as he fed her the kichdi which he made with his own hands downstairs. Mmm...Veer...Yeh sabh kya hai? Aaj itna pyaar aaraha hai? Aaj subah voh pyaar kahaan tha? Bani pushed his hand away before he could force the last spoon in her mouth and turned her face to the side to convey her anger. Veer sighed and put the bowl down on the nightstand. He gently kissed Bani's shoulder, making her shiver at the contact, and then trailed soft kisses along her collar bone, to her jawline, and then a couple of pecks on the corner of the clenched lips. Gharwali...I'm sorry...I'm sorry keh maine itni deyr...itni deyr laghaadi...tume itna bhura bhalla kahan...tumein yaadh nuy karr paaya. I...I deserve any punishment you want to give. Sach mein Bani...maine tumein bauhat chotth paunchayi...Sweetheart? Please baby...ek bhaar muje dekh toh lo...Veer pleaded with her. Bani turned her head even further and whimpered a bit. Veer sat up slightly and leaned his head to see her face. When he saw the tears streaming down his cheeks his heart sank. He knew it was bad and knew that she was heartbroken, but actually seeing her cry, seeing the effect that his rejection had on her, it made him realize just how bad he messed up. He was worried now that things would never be the same.
Bani...I...I love you...I love you so much...aggar...aggar tum chaahti ho ke main tumse door...aur humaare bache se door...I...I won't ever bother you...Bani didn't say anything, but just laid down and dug her tear-soaked face into the pillow. Veer let his tears fall as well and grabbed a pillow and walked over to the door. As he rested his hand on the knob he gently said Tum humesha mera kal thi, aaj ho, aur aane wala kal bhi hogi...janam janam mein main tumaari hi ibaadat karunga....Main...main tumse door rahunga jabh takh tum na chaho. Good night sweetheart....I love you. He turned the know all the way and then felt something at the back of his shoulder. When he looked down he saw that it was the spoon. B...Bani? Veer looked over at Bani who was standing on the bed now with the bowl in her hand. He understood. Yes, she was heartbroken but more than that she was absolutely pissed. And she was yet to get her anger out. It would be a long night.
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FanfictionA story about what I think should have happened in Naagin 5 instead of Veer and Bani passing away.