Retributed And Redempted Love

9. Tiger atrocities 🐶

Helo all,

Romba seekram update pannitano😜🏃‍♀️🏃‍♀️

Sorry for the delay.

Just want a feedback of the story. Is the story line good? Or do I want to change anything? Constructive criticisms are always welcome. So pls tell your opinion about the story both positive and negative.

Purely fictional don't take it personal.

Loved the YouTube edit very much  that is in the header. Tell your opinion if you like that.

Let's get into the story,

Shravan's trance was broken when Arjun patted his shoulder.

Arjun : Enna da yosanai
(What are you thinking?)

Shravan looked Saakshi who was happily feeding sweet to Aadhi and Anjali and smirked.

Arjun followed his gaze and sighed.

Arjun : Nalla yosichaya pinna regret pannatha.
(Did you think once again? Don't regret after everything happened)

Sharvan glared at him and removed his hands from his shoulder. Arjun shook his head.

Arjun : Etho pannu. Company la irunthu call vanthuthu antha Bombay client vanthurukaram.
(Do anything. I got a call from a company and they informed that Bombay client arrived )

Sharvan : So ipa nama company ku ponuma
(So now we want to go to company)

Arjun nodded.

Shravan went towards Aadhi and explained his situation. Aadhi nodded in understanding.

Aadhi : Ok nanba nanga tomorrow home ku varom.
(OK friend, then we will visit home tomorrow)

Shravan: Ok sir then we are leaving.

Saakshi gave chocolates to all children and kissed them on their forehead. They in return kissed her cheeks. Saakshi also gave sweet box to elders. They blessed her. Aadhi got a call from his higher officials, so he informed Saakshi to send off them as Anjali was busy in kitchen.

Shravan made everyone one to sit inside the car. He saw Saakshi coming towards them with a smile.

Saakshi : Intha Akkava maranthurathinga na intha Saturday ungala paka varen.
(Don't forget this sister. I will visit you all in this Saturday)

Children: Bye akka.

They shouted chorusly making her chuckle.

Shravan laughed and closed the car door and went towards Saakshi.

Shravan: Enna madam apa unga annan tomorrow varatha solliruntharu. Ana nee Saturday solra.
(What madam? Your bro told us that he would visit them tomorrow but you were telling that you would visit  them on Saturday)

Saakshi: Enaku tomorrow college iruku inaike annan marriage nu solli cut adichiten.
(Tomorrow I am having college and today itself I bunked by saying the reason as my brother's marriage)

Shravan: Ohh

Saakshi: Ohhh

Mugen cleared his throat.

Shravan didn't mind him. But Mugen didn't feel right about Shravan's behavior so he dragged Shravan away from Saakshi by telling that they have an important business meet. Saakshi went inside after sending off them.

Here, after dropping the children and elders they drove towards his company.

While driving,

Mugen : Machi Saakshi
(Dude Saakshi)