3. Rewrite and new stuff

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Ok I'm thinking of rewriting this book
The plot will stay the same, but I'm thinking of making it half fanfic half rp.

I'll just leave this up if anyone wants




OKAY I DECIDED NOT TO CANCEL yay :)



Rocky

I don't know what had hit me but whatever it was, stopped my gagging problem.
I coughed out a meteor.
Weird.
Anyways, after a while I was walking to Suitcases house letting her know what had happened.
On my way, I saw Leafy being chased by I think GB TB Pen Blocky Pencil Ice Cube Pin and Teardrop.
I saw Blocky and grabbed his arm. Luckily, Blocky knew why I grabbed his arm or else the scene would just be awkward. "Rocky! We have to get Leafy! She stole Firey's D.I!"
Me and Blocky were both quiet then I died laughing and began to pat Blocky on the head leaving him shocked. Wow Eraser's right. Blocky's coming up with the most funniest shot ever. Respect for the guy.
Thinking back, i remember the D. I that we were battling for a week ago. I actually managed to come in literally 6TH PLACE! Behind Yo Yo Ball,Profile Picture, Bubble, Leafy and Firey. Ok, 8th place because Flower and Spongy were given a second chance. Stuff like D.Is had Spongy written all over it, so instead of being chosen to given a second chance like Flower and Blocky, Spongy earned his way back which shocked those who had been out of the contest when Spongy was given the chance to rejoin.

Anyways, I text Nickel what Blocky told me. For some reason he didn't text back. Well Nickel is serious and Blocky is the opposite of Nickel so that may be why. Heh.

On my way, I hear someone say hi to me. I turned around and saw 4 kids my age. I think some were Nickel's friends. Just like the D. I, Nickel, Baseball and his friends were competing for $100. From what Nickel told me, we were down to two kids named OJ Manager and Taco Smarts.

"Hey have you seen a meteor?" The girl in green said. I handed the meteor to her. "Thanks. Found it in my backyard. Cool right?" I nodded. "I showed it to Golf Ball and she destroyed that Yo Yo Ball kid's notebook. Poor kid." I agreed. I remember YYB asking GB is she was ok and she just grabbed YYB's notebook, ripped it in half and just threw it at the Freesmart alliance. But Golf Ball is my friend so I won't talk shit about her.
"Speaking of Golf Ball,aren't you that kid who's friends with her,Nickel, Yo Yo Ball and Tennis Ball?" the kid with a red Mohawk asked. I nodded. Before the nonbinary in brown overalls and yellow spikey hair could ask my name because I'm pretty sure they think I'm sus, Baseballs car pulled over. Inside was Nickel, Balloon and Yo Yo Ball. "Hey Rocky, we're going to watch OJ and Taco verse it out at school. Suitcase is at work so she might come late, so we saved you a spot." "Oh yeah, I totally forgot." the nonbinary said. I'd call them by their real name but idk their name. "I think I'll head home." The green girl said. "You coming Fan?" "Yeah." the red Mohawk named Fan said. That just leaves me and the two other kids. Immediately the 4th kid jumped into the car to join and us 2 fallowed.

On the way to the school, I typed on my phone bc idk how to write and typed what Blocky said to me and showed it to everyone.
Everyone knew Blocky was a prankster but what I didn't know was that he wasn't lying. Leafy did steal the D. I from Firey.

And I don't think it's a big deal. "I'm sorry what?" Baseball asked when i showed him what i typed. I typed Firey could just buy another D. I right?
"Rocky, D. I stands for Dream Island and those cost a fortune." Nickel explained. "Ouch." Yo Yo Ball said. The nonbinary, who's name I learned is Paintbrush looked at Yo Yo Ball. "What's with you? Firey treated you like trash over an honest mistake." Paintbrush said. "It wasn't an honest mistake." Yo Yo Ball said. "Needle was in the hospital dying and I was saying that I should've died over her and everyone got mad and fed up with me." "But Needle survived and that was back in January right?" Balloon asked YYB. "Y- yeah." Yo Yo Ball said. "DUDE, THAT WAS 8 MONTHS AGO!" Balloon said. "I've been mad at my family longer than that." Yo Yo Ball said. "You had a good reason though and Needle survived." It was nice to see Balloon changing for the better. "Not to mention that two months later, you had an infection and went through deadly surgery only to find how little some people care." Balloon said. "But I didn't die and wasn't close to death." Yo Yo Ball said. "I I don't know, I was given amnesia." Yo Yo Ball admitted. "Hey we're here." Baseball said changing the subject

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