❝Annihilation itself is no death to evil. Only good where evil was, is evil dead. An evil thing must live with its evil until it chooses to be good. That alone is the slaying of evil.❞
▬George MacDonald
⏀A award show with a Twist...
Cover: 5/5 The cover was aesthetic! Very attractive! It portrayed the vibe of the aesthetic+detective one which actually suited the plot and the font was readable
Title: 4/5 The title was short and crisp! But, it was too short to be a title and was quite simple and ordinary
Blurb: 5/5 The blurb was well-written! The plot wasn't spilled in the blurb and managed to convey the message without spoiler
Pace: 5/5 The pace was perfect! Since, it's a crime story the pace must be a slow burn and it really justified that
Plot: 18/20 The plot was complicated, Especially in the case of crime detective stories there is definitely a need to explain the plot well in a manner that readers understand. I felt that the plot was innovational and ingenious. The storyline was good with the crime plot. I was a little lost at some point of the story with the clues and later catched up so, a little bit of briefing would help. At the first three chapters, it contained sexual subjects so a trigger warning or censoring the words could've been done
Character development: 13/15 I didn't find that much of a character development since the story is especially of the main leads and detectives. But yeah the character development of the suspects were impressive. As it is a crime story, Character development is necessary and the story justified it.
Grammar: 19/20 I rarely found any grammatical errors. Though it had errors, it didn't interrupt the reading. It was literally invisible!
Writing style: 14/15 The writing style was amazing. Some parts which were supposed to be briefed well in order for readers to understand were perfectly done. Crime stories always has that aura in the writing which highlights the plot and drives readers crazy and I felt that in your writing
Overall Enjoyment: 9/10 Overall Enjoyment was Excellent! I really enjoyed the story! The Best Crime Story I've ever read so far! Honestly, a chef's kiss! Loved your work!
Total: 92/100
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