A call rings...........
Person-1 :- laga
Person-2 :- nahi utha Rahi
Person-1 :- ache se mail Kiya tha
Person-2 :- ha Maine kr diya tha pr dekha nahi usne
Person-1 :- janti hu use dekha hoga bs upar dekh kr hi ruk gyi hogi.
Person-3 :- tm dono kyu pareshaan ho rahe ho. Thodi der to ruko.
Person-1 :- papa pareshaan kaise na ho monami phone nhi utha rhi hai
Person-3 :- Vihaan Shweta relax utha legi
Person-1 shweta
Person-2 vihaan
Person-3 Sanjay
Sanjay- tm dono thoda relax kro waise bhi kl aa rahi hai face to face baat krlenge. Sb thik hoga
Ye shadi hogi chahe jo ho. Ab sb thik krne ka yahi raasta hai.
Vihaan- mai karan se baat krta hu. Pr shyd ye monu ke saath jabardasti hogi.
Shweta- vihaan hm kya karan ko nhi jaante or hamari situation. Karan se best Vikram ko kon handle karega. uske liye ye best hai.
Vihaan- I hope karan monami ko Vikram se safe rakhe. Uski shadi ke Baad shyd Vikram monami ka picha chod de.
They all sit and eat breakfast.
A person is lost in his thoughts and tears are forming.
Person-2-- kya hua janab firse who sb soch rhe ho.
Person-1-- kya hai faizi niche kaha na nhi krni shaadi to fir tu kyu aaya hai ja tha se.
Faizi- karan hm chle jayenge pr vihaan se baat to kr lo. Kl uski or bhabhi ki wedding anniversary hai tu aa wha pr baat kr usse.
He starts going ........but turns
Waise kl monami bhi aa rahi hai mil Lena.
This line gets stuck in his mind and he nooded.
Karan to himself - Tmse mil kr samjhana hoga ki mai tmse shaadi nahi kr sakta.
Scene changes ...
Ravi- are yaar mai mzk kr rha tha... Pratham Bhai ...... Bachao ......
Pratham- ek minute ye kya ho rha hai kyu bhag rha hai tu.
Priya- mai batati ho. Dekho ye mujhe kb se pareshaan kr rha hai. Mujhe kl ke liye dress bhi select krni hai or ye...
Ravi- wait a second kl Aisa kya hai..ki madam ko itna banna hai.
Pratham- oye gadhe tu phir bhul gya, kl bhai ke liye Jo rishte ki baat chal rhi hai wo ladki India aa rhi hai.
Priya- haa or sach khu to I really wish, ye ladki kavya jaise na ho or Bhai ki life sort ho jaye.
Ravi- waise Priya karan Bhai ko Bhai or pratham Bhai ko pratham ye baat to alag hai tm pratham ko Bhai.....
Priya + pratham-- just shut up Aisa nhi ho sakta.
Ravi - ooo bete kya baat hai...acha Mai chalta hu ..waise bhi mai romantic conversation bich me nhi sunta... Byee .
Pratham- oyyee rukk....
Priya- wooooo....mai chalti hu ready hona hai.
Pratham black dress me achi lagti ho.
Priya turna and smiles and nods and goes.
Scene changes........
Sid- Sanju ye wali file ki copies factory me bhijwa do.
Sanju- bas Sid ruko mujhe Tmse kuch kehna hai.
Irritated Sanju said as she can't confess her love while sid is busy in work.
Sanju- Sid hm keh na chahte hai ki wo hm Tmse wo l love wo hm bs ye
Sid- hm... Bs kya complete it Sanju.
By going close and smiling.
Then faizi and koel comes.
Faizi- Sid yaar tu hi samjha ise ki ye jo keh rhi hai humne Aisa nhi kiya.
Koel- nhi Sid aaj to dudh ka dudh or Pani ka Pani ho hi Jaye.
Sid- guys kya hua hai .ye fighting mode.......what
Koel- ye us malhotra ki p.a ke saath flirt kr rha tha.
Faizi- to aap kyu jal rhi hai.
Koel- jaise ki tumhe nhi pata.
Faizi- hm nahi jante. Tm bata dona.
Koel- kyunki Mai Tmse.
Everyone has a message.
Sanju- I think hame chalne chahiye.
As we know the topic let's go.
Faizi+koel+sid- chalo
Scene changes
Ravi- Aditi chalo na message nahi padha. Sbko aana hai.
Aditi- Ha to family me ana hai or Mai to....
Ravi- ha right or prakash uncle family nhi hai ye kisne kaha. Itne bade mansion me jitne log rehte hai. Wo ek family hai or tm bhi... So chalo.
Aditi- kabhi kabhi lgta hai tm wahi ho jo mujhse hamesha ladte ho.
Ravi- Ladta hu kyunki acha lagta, apna sa pr is baat se agr tm family se alag hone lago to that's not fair
So chale.
Aditi- chalo ( kya ye bhi mujhe like krta hai ya bs dost Manta hai. Pr jo bhi ho mai isme khush hu.
Scene changes
Kalyani- sb aa gaye..
Suraj- Ma abhi karan or mahir nhi aaye.
Vinit- wo mahir karan bhai ke saath site pr gya hai aata hi hoga.
Mahir- kya hua mujhe kisine yaad kiya.
(Karan and mahir came there)
Sid- mahir chal aja sb Tera hi wait kr rahe the.
Kalyani- karan yha aa or bata Tera faisla
Karan- dekhiye dadi Mai bta Chuka
Mai nhi karunga shadi fir bhi aap sb aise.......mai kavya ko nahi bhul sakta or nahi mujhe Ghar ke matters me padna hai. Mai shaadi nahi karunga. Mai ready nhi hu kisi commitment ke liye.
Kalyani- wo ladki puttar jo tujhe chod ke chali gyi. Beta sharton pr tiki shaadi kabhi shaadi nhi hoti.
Karan- dadi pls mujhe force mat kijiye, mai mere kal ke baare me baat nhi karna chahta.
Kalyani- dekh tu,..mai nahi janti.
Tu kal aayega or usse milega. Agr tu meri thodi bhi izzat krta hai to is shaadi se tu mana nhi krega or ye mere aakhiri faisla hai.
Everyone goes one by one and karan leaves the place.
The youngsters go to garden their adda to spent their quality time except karan.
Yaar mujhe laga nani discussion krengi but unhone to sidha faisla suna Diya said pratham breaking the silence.
I agree with Bhai pata nhi karan Bhai kaise react krenge said Aditi.
Guys hm sb ko dikhta hai ki kavya kaisi thi but karan ki aankhon par pyaar ki patti hai said Bela
Acha leave all this but kisine socha ki bhai ki jo halat hai wo monami ko chance denge said Priya.
Usse pehle ye socho ki karan kabhi bhi monami ko pyaar krega said Shreya.
Or usse pehle kya wo ladki karan ke liye sahi hai said vinit.
Par hm sbne abhi photo dekhi kha hai saare bade logo na dekhi or karan ko di or usne phaar diya said mahir.
Pata nhi kyu lag rha hai ki vihaan Bhai ki sister karan Bhai ke liye bilkul shi hai said Ravi with a smile.
I agree said koel and Sanju together.
I think hame chlna chahiye kl milke dekh lenge said faizi.
Or I am sure wo na karan bro ke takkar ki hogi tabhi to vihaan Bhai or Suraj uncle dono ko karan or unka rishta sahi lagta hai said Sid.
Thik hai to kl milte hai or dekhte hai kya hota hai said Sanju.
Ok bye everyone said koel
Bye said all.
And goes to room
Scene changes
Kya hai yaar monu message kr rahi hai call nhi kr sakti said a irritated vihaan.
Hadh hai yaar ab msg kr rhi hai to aise hi baat kro. kya msg hai said shweta.
Monami- hii bhai kaise ho?
Vihaan- thik hu, call nhi kr sakti.
Monami- sorry Bhai abhi aise hi baat krlo pls.
Vihaan- ok but tu kl aa rhi hai?
Monami- ha bhai I am coming bs thoda wait krna ek surprise hai.
Vihaan- surprise. interesting.
acha woh photo dekha.
Monami- Bhai, I very well know ki kl Mai is topic se escape nhi kr sakti to aaj is baare me baat nhi krte.
Waise 12 baj gaye.
Happy 😊 aniversary Bhai bhabhi
Vihaan- hm dono ki taraf se thankyou so much.
Monami- ok good night bye. See u tomorrow.
Vihaan- good night.
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I have started re-writing, the story will have some slight changes here and there.
Also thankyou for being with me despite my writing has so many mistakes.
Please from now on point any mistake you see. It clears the confusion.
Vihaan and shweta--? Viheta
Vinit and shreya--? Vinitya
Bela and Mahir--?Behir
Abir and misti--? Mishbir
Karan and monami--Moran
Siddharth and sanjana--Sidsa
Faizi and koel--Koezi
Pratham and priya--? Priyam
Ravi and aditi--? Rati
Aahan and pankti--? Aahankti
Also do check is the above names are write or wrong.
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The pure feeling of love
FanfictionA new writer who wants your support. I have watched ziddi dil Mane na and love the show a lot so just want to give my imagination a shape and love of the readers.
