Confession

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Part 11
Page no. 47
At morning 8:00
Raavi is doing usual routine at room
Shiva enters room after taking a shower
Shiva is wet shirtless n in towel
Raavi looks at him with wide eyes n blushy face
Raavi (inner voice) : Haaye mere pati kitna hot hai full hero types six pack abs hai muje touch karne hai feel leni hai aeh gadheri kya bol ri h control raavi control
Shiva looks at her n then went near her
Shiva : Ghoor kya ri h khana h muje
Raavi nodded yes
Shiva : Hain
Raavi(with shy n stammer ) : Nahi main tuje kyu khau bohat kuch h ghar main khane ko
Shiva went more close to her he put his hands around her waist
Raavi start blushing
Shiva : Kal tune yeh kaha tha ki tu mere bina ni reh sakti par aisa kyu chipkali
Raavi : Tuje ni pata
Shiva : Nahi tu bol de apne muh se
Raavi understood what he means
Raavi put her hands around his neck
Raavi : Main kyu bolu tu bol
Shiva : Pehle tu bolegi chipkali
Raavi : Pehle tu bolega smjha bhootnath
Shiva : Ae chipkali bolna toh tuje hi padega smjhi
Raavi : Ae bandar maine ni bolni wali
Shiva : Dekhte hai
Raavi : Dekhte hai
They both having deep eye contact with full of love n tashan
Tak Tak someone knocks the door
Shivi did'nt heard the voice as they both r lost in each other
Again tak tak this time they both heard
They both release each other n feels shy
Shiva without eye contact : Ah main main woh washroom main jake ready hojata hu tu dekh kon aaya hai
Raavi nodded yes shyly
Raavi : Rishita tum yaha
Shiva heard rishita name he quickly gets ready n get back to room
He looks rishita with anger
Rishita hugs Raavi
Rishita : I am sorry Raavi I m really sorry mujse aise galti phirse nahi hogi
Raavi hugs her back
Raavi : It's okay Rishita aab bhul jao bi hua
Shiva (inner voice) : Iska kuch ni ho sakta
Samjh le Shiva tuje iska chowkidaar hamesha banna padega
Rishita : Okay toh breakfast karne chale
Shiva : Rishita Bhabhi aap chalo hum aate hai
Rishita left with okay reply
Shiva : Dekh chipkali maine tuje kal raat promise kiya tha ki main kuch galat faltu ni sochunga par aaj tu bi muje ek promise kar koi tuje kuch bi bolega tu muje batyegi
Raavi smile as his bhootnath care gesture n protectiveness : Promise
Shiva : Chal nashta karte h bhook lagi
Raavi : Bhuka bhootnath

Page no. 48
Everyone is having breakfast
(Suman is not there as she went to kanta kaki house)
Raavi : Dhara Di aapki aur gombi ki shadi ko 10 saal hogaye main kabse puchne ka soch ri thi aap dono main se apne pyare ka izhar pehle kisne kiya tha
Shiva understood what raavi wants to do
Dhara : Yeh baat kaha se aayi achnak se
Raavi : Aise hi mann main aaya toh puch liya batao na dhara di
Dhara : Chup chap nashta kar yeh kya  baatein hai
Rishita : Bhabhi raavi ne sahi question pucha hai even I want to know
Dhara : Gombi ne
Raavi : oohh
Then Raavi looked at Shiva n whisper :Suna Shiva
Shiva : Bhabhi ek paratha aur
Raavi : Rishita tumahra bi batao
Rishita : Of course Dev ne kiya tha
Raavi again : Suna Shiva
Shiva : Bhabhi thoda achaar
Raavi glared at Shiva with anger
Raavi (inner voice) : Gadhera jaanmujhke kar raha hai mujse jyada khane ki padi h
Bolna toh tuje hi padega
Krish : Raavi Bhabhi aapka bi bata doh
Raavi with anger voice : College ni jana tuje jaldi kha aur ja
Shiva laugh softly n rest got confused that whats going on between shivi
Raavi look at him with anger
As soon everyone is done with breakfast start leaving
Shiva whispers in raavi ear : Tu kitna bi kar le bolegi toh tu hi pehle
Shiva winked : Bye chipkali
Raavi : Bandar

Page no. 49
At 5:00 evening Pandya store
Shiva message Raavi
Message : Soch liya chipkali kaise kehgi apne dil ki baat
Reply : Yeh tu soch kyunki yeh tu karne wala hai
Shiva laughs n gets busy with store work
After sometime
Raavi is done with household work
She went to room n getting bored so
She start watching a movie
N Shiva is busy with customers
Customer (Kush Shiva's Friend)  : Shiva yeh list h saman dena
Shiva : Ary kush kitne dino baad mil raha h kaisa hai aur kya hua teri woh friend jisko teko propose karna tha girlfriend banana tha shadi karni thi woh gaya na
Kush : Chod na Shiva
Shiva : Ary tu toh udas hogaya mana kar diya kya
Kush : Ary bolne ka mauka hi kaha mila yaar maine der kardi Shiva muje pata tha woh bi mujse pyare karti h isliye socha aaram se bolunga par itne main uske parents ne uski shadi kahi aur fix kar di aur usne socha maine sirf usse dost manta hu isliye usse ha kar di aur uski shadi hogayi
Shiva : Koi ni tu tension mat le aab hogaya toh kya kar sakte hai
Kush : Shiva galti na meri h badi mushkil se milta h sacha pyare sache ehsaas hum na apne aap main busy world main ego main sab bhul jaate hai jab pyare ho jaye bol dena chaiye apne jazzbaat bata dene chaiye
Shiva nodded
Kush(with sad face) : Chalta hu
Shiva gets busy with store work but he keep remembering kush words that sacha pyare mushkil se milta hai
Raavi finishes the movie n start crying
Raavi : kitni bekaar movie thi esi dukh bhari ending koi karta h kya heroine ke love confession ke pehle hi hero ki death hojati hai accident se bakwas bewkoof pagal writer
Shiva (inner voice) : Pyare toh muje bi badi mushkil se mila hai socha ni tha insab main padunga par hogaya meri aur chipkali ki pyare ki kahani toh sabse alag h dushmani se pyare tak ka safar nahi aab koi ego ni main aa raha hu chipkali
Shiva leaves the work n start running for home
Gombi : Kaha bhaag raha h Shiva
Shiva wide smile n blush : Aata hu gombi
Raavi to herself : Uss heroine ka toh pata ni lekin muje akal jarur aagayi h main ni rakhne wali faltu ka ego muje mera hero badi mushkil se mila h main aa ri hu Shiva
Raavi wipe the tears n start running for Store

Page no. 50
At somanth ki gali (pandya niwas wali)
Shivi look at each other
Shiva : Raavi
Raavi : Shiva
Shivi(Together) : I LOVE YOU
Both hug each other n happy tears in their eyes (they forgot about the world people around them it's just two of them)
Lady to kanta kaki : Maine inki shadi ke din kaha tha ki kya hoga in dono ka inki shadi ek hafte se jyada ni tikegi par aaj inhe dekh kar yakeen hogaya Shiva Raavi ek dusre ke liye hi banne hai inka rishta sache pyare aur samarpan se bharpur hai
Some people r laughing some r whispering some r clapping
Shivi realises what they have done
They confessed their love in the middle of road they both feels shy awkward
Shivi holds hands n shyly went to pandya niwas they both realises suman rishita dhara krish all saw their confession n cheery on top rishita video calls dev so gombi n dev also witness their confession
They felt more awkwardness
But all r happy n hug them one by one
Family gathers at aangan
Just normal dance n fun at aangan
Prafulla heard this news from someone so she is curious to know
She came to pandya niwas to know this news is fake but saw all of them happily dancing
Prafulla : Raavi ae raavi
Raavi : Masi aap andar aao na
Prafulla : Merko sach sach batana jo maine suna woh galat h na
Shiva : Ae mami tune jo suna woh sach h
Shiva come close to raavi n put his hands on her waist n say I love u chipkali
Raavi laughs : I love u too Shiva
Prafulla say o maro bhogilal n she went back to her home
Shiva : Ae mami kaha ja ri h naach na hamare sath
Raavi : Bada maza aaya tuje masi ko pareshan karne main
Shiva : Ha toh uski beti meri hui
Shiva start dancing
Raavi laughs : Muje bi maza aaya
Krish : Oh somanth ke Laila majnu idhar aake nacho waha akele akele kya hai
Shiva : Ae
Everyone lil bit of dancing fun moments enjoy dinner n then went to their rooms

Page no. 51
At shivi room
Raavi is in tears n say I love u Shiva
Shiva cupped her face wipe her tears n then he kiss her forehead n say I love u too Raavi
They both hug tightly
Raavi (inner voice) : Thank u shivji muje sacha pyare dilane ke liye main Shiva ko hamesha khush rakhungi aur uski sari wishes puri karungi
Shiva (inner voice) : Thank u somnath muje chipkali dene ke liye main hamesha iska khyaal rakhunga aur isse koi pareshani ni aana dunga
Shivi broke hug
They went to bed n sleep peacefully in each other arms

Precap : Treasure hunt movie date ice cream

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