Final Chat

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Yea its finally over!, first time i written a finish book, the last time i written one it ended up in a disaster i shall say

There's nothing really to say but thank you for reading till the end, hope you guys enjoy it, or broken your heart at least

Here's a 5 little behind the scenes of the creative process for the story

1. In the fight with Zhongli, in the finale scene the Fatui, Liyue military, Crux Ship, Hu Tao and the Three animal adepti is supposed to be present

But it was great in thought, difficult when written, I'm scared that it will drag too long so i just made it so that only Xiao and Ganyu appear

2. The fight was originally located at Mt Tiansheng, Liyue but when i was writing the story, i accidentally forgot about it and made it in Guyun Stone Forest

yea it's that lame of a reason

The reason why i originally want it to be in Mt Tiansheng is because the Guizhong Ballista is mounted there i think that its only reasonable that an archon is killed by a weapon made by an Archon

I accidentally forgot about that plot tho, so that's why i put Albedo in the story helping Aether, because i feel like he will know how to recreate it just from a glance

3. Beidou was once a big part of the story, she will set foot on Guyun and team up with Zhongli(before Morax) to battle Aether, but i accidentally made her command the Crux to set sail to Liyue Harbor so no turning back

Yeah a lot of my mistake is me being a dumbass

4. There was originally a part about how the country of Mondstadt, Liyue and Inazuma government react to this situation

But i found writing Mondstadt and Liyue to be easy, but not for Inazuma since i haven't played that part yet

And i feel like its kinda weird to leave out inazuma or make it so that its shorter then the other, so i just deleat the whole thing

5. The Anemo Gonsis once not part of the story since the beginning

But i feel that fighting Morax, Ganyu and Xiao 3 on 1 with just a Geo Gnosis to be a little bit too unbalance, so i just threw it to him and hope for the best

And it did, it make a i think reasonable outcome and for the last shot of the reason why Venti didn't attack is because of the reason he had said, and also that he knew he couldn't win no matter what

I find the fact someone who could get kick by Signora could beat someone with two gnosis and a Albedo to be a bit unreasonable

And attacking them would be making my story a bit too out of title, so that's the reason for anyone whom is curious

And thats about it for this story from me

Finally, i hope you truly did enjoy yourself reading this book and i hope that this could happen again, tata~

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