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Suku...kore Naal ayitt parayanam enn vicharikkuva...venda venda pavalle enn vekkumbo iyalk valiya jaada allee??....

Ningalk ellarkkum update venam pakshe voteum commentum idan vayyaa...njan ee parayunnath cheyyathavare patti anne...atleast ningalk vendii njan ente samayam eduth 3000,4000 words oro chptrilum update tharunnath enn engilum orth voteum commentum thannudee....???

Ippo korach busy ayirunnu athaa update late avanee...njan maximum ennik kittunna time use cheyyunonda ezhuthane pakshe ningalde response (vote & comment)  ellathe njan ezuthunnathin enth ardham ond...?

Enne kattakk support  cheyyunavr ond..avare patti alla njan ippo paranjath...ee paranjath kanditt engilum cheyyathavar atleast oru vote engilum tharanam...

Pinne oru important karyam...ee story odane theerum Minimum oru 7,8 chp kude kanum njan munbathe oru chp ittatha but oru manshyan polum onnum mindilla..entha Suku athrakkum bore aano enta story...nigal paray...

nigalokke muzhuvan vaikkunnundo ennu vare ennik doubt ind..oro chp kazhiyumbo njan kollavoo ennu choikkum athinelum onnu Comment ittude...

Ahh poii vaichoo....

Vote and comment marakkanda prethekichu comments...tharan pattathilla engil ee parisarathottu varanda...

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Appo evideya paranj nirthiye..

Taekook room...

So Taede vili kettu Kookie avalde neckil ninnu tala matti....he intensely stares into her eyes...Taede heart beat kudi kudii ippo poti therikkum enna conditionil aanu ulle..cause innevare Kookiede kannil kanditillatha entho..something different she could see through his sparkling eyes..

Tae onnum mindathe Kookieye nokki kidannu... Kookie is still hovering over her and waiting for her reply...but aval onnum mindathond avan thanne mindii..

Kookie : entha??..husky voice..
Tae : okay..
Kookie : sherikum...*mane manasil banana milk pottii*...
Tae : mhh..
Kookie : enne pattikaruth..
Tae : sathyam...
Kookie : you sure you really want this??..
Tae : dhee manshya enta swabhavam marrunennu munne venel karyam sadhicho..
Kookie : 😏..okay..pinne athum ithum parajond enta aduth vararuth...
Tae : 😑..
Kookie : chuckles and pecked her nose..

Then he leaned towards her lips..but pettannu...

Gsgsgh..gghhsh..door knocking sound..

From outside..

Felix : mane Kookie...vaathil thurakeda..kutta..

Kookie : 😩😵‍💫...enta karthave ivane kond..
Tae : 🤭..
Kookie : chirikkunoo ninnak ullath njan tharave..
Tae : ayikkote ippo chettan poii door thurakk... pushed him away..
Kookie : 😤..

Kookie avasam manasilla manasode poii door thurannu appo ara avide...

Felix avide 32 pallum kanichu ilichond nikkunnu...

Felix avide 32 pallum kanichu ilichond nikkunnu

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