right so at the time i was doing this story i was only ten.. yes surprising huh?? had a huge dirty mind at 12 and i liked tony lopez at the time thinking thst if i did a story of the both would be nice, not expecting that this would get alot of views, im now 15 nearly 16 in a couple of months. i have gotten better and have hardly updated just really need some ideas sorry for everything.. if it would be best going over everything and re-writing most of it i can do because now i realise it did go really fast or i redo it all??
