Voices in my head (hp fanfic) (discontinued, being rewritten)

And the story begins

Harry Potter was a secret. He lived in the cellar, under the trapdoor in the cupboard under the stairs in number 4 Privet Drive Little Whinging Surrey United Kingdoms. No one from the muggle world knew he existed save for his relatives. That included himself.

Figg knew that Harry existed and was going to help him. She took control of their shared body half the time. The body was always tied up, with a blindfold & gag. She couldn't fight back, only share some of his pain. It wasn't enough. Soon a new personality was born.

Leo was a piece of Harry, he knew. Ms.Figg was a nice old lady doing all she could to help Harry. It was destroying her. So Leo introduced himself when he took over, when he noticed Ms.Figg to reach her limit.

Leo was someone Figg thought she would never be so happy to meet. He was, apparently, a part of Harry. A young, immature, reckless, and naive child would be her best description of him. Before she realized it, she was mothering him.

Like this many years pass. Currently Harry is 11. His hogwarts letter arrives in the mail. The dursleys jump at the opportunity to send Harry away. Over these years, Harry hadn't learned about his alters. To him, they were just the voices in his head.

A/N Yes I know it is bad. This is the second draft though, I do write these out on paper before typing them. I hope that you enjoyed. Thus book does change POVs alot, I'd imagine almost every paragraph to be a change in the POV. Most of the time it will be clear who's POV it is as it's always a third person limited POV in a very weirdly third person omniscient for the whole book. We didn't get to see a lot of it with the first to chapters, however here is a nice example and most of the rest of the book I imagine will be similar. As more characters get introduced the more fun we'll have. We may even get some very unique POVs and perspectives as well. All the more I hope you enjoyed.