Your playing honkai impact while walking and you didn't realize you are about to get hit by truck kun, then it was to late. However you woke up and you have the body of Haxxor Bunny you are in an abandoned building and notice you are in bnha world y...
When I read the comments people. Keep saying it's a bit fast, and I can't tell if it's fast or not so reread this story and my gosh...
The pacing...
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Not only that, this story isn't even about Haxxor bronya anymore, there are different characters that is in here but it's not in the description or in the title of the story.
I-i-I just... Cringeeee...
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Looking at the overall is... Fast pace, cringe, title and story doesn't really fit, and guy turn girl, this are my reasons.
I though turn guy to girl would be interesting but in the long run it's not since it will be weird.
Because of this, I am unmotivated... Ironic cause last chapter is that a storm is approaching.
However I'm going to make a better version of this.
This will also use as... My example, and since a lot of people have a lot of advice in the comments. It is very usefull to make a better version.
Anyway that's it thank you for reading this.
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