Sometimes you have to review, correct, what you write, in the hope that you become better, as you go further and write more. This is my first story, of, I hope, many to come, however, although it had 16 chapters, now there are only fifteen, the reason is simple. During the review, I deleted the draft, that is, chapter 16, and although I remember how it went and most of what I wrote, I didn't want to go into it again, because it wouldn't be the same. Thanks for reading my works, I'm happy, you can also find me on Inkitt, under the name JackieS, so comment, criticize, enjoy, read, write....
With love,JJJackF
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Make me , Alpha
FantasyShe was aware of those man looking at her with lust, while she was running true the park, wich makes her angry and sad at the same time, but she just mahe her phones louder and smiled in her chin. She wanted something real, although it was impossibl...
