"Jackass" an original story

I'm calling this the pilot

YOOOOOO!!!!! First time writing, tell me if you see any grammar/spelling mistakes. If you get a reference, let me know, bc that'd be awesome. Also PLEASE watch the videos at the end of each chapter, they're fire.

EPISODE 0.5: THE PILOT

8:00 A.M.

Inside of a large building two people stand by what looks like a room in a psych ward wearing all types of protective gear and wielding large rifles filled to the brim with horse tranquilizers.

Guard 1: I heard the boss is trying something new today.

Guard 2: Really? It's about time they gave us a raise.

Guard 1: No dumbass, with the patients.

Guard 2: What is it?

Guard 1: Apparently there aren't enough cells for any more people so they're "cutting off the weak links."

Guard 2: Oh god, it'll be a blood bath. I sure as hell don't wanna be the one on duty when that happens.

??????: That sure would be unfortunate, wouldn't it?

Guard 1: Oh! Sir, I-I didn't see you there, we were just talking about-

??????: Complaining about your current positions?

Guard 2: No sir, we're still watching him, happily.

??????: I would hope so, remember what happens if we catch you slacking?

Guard 1: Yes sir.

??????: Good, now you both get the day off, full pay, baring no questions or trouble.

Guard 1: Thank you, sir!

Guard 2: Thank you.

??????: Don't mistake my generosity for kindness, you are simply lucky that there are bigger things for me to deal with...

Guard 1 and Guard 2: Of course sir!

?????? looks into a dark room with a one-way mirror, he presses a button and begins speaking to someone inside.

??????: How are you doing today?

Jack: piss off.

??????: I trust you heard the guards?

Jack just glares at the mysterious figure.

??????: Would you like to join the others?

Jack: *sigh* yes.

The Warden: Then consider this your fun for the month.

8:20 A.M.

Cut to a giant field with a dome above it with over 20 barred entrances, behind each there are 1-4 people in a cage or chains, or some other binding. The more people behind the bars the more guards accompanying them. Here we get a look at our main protagonist.(there are a few)

His name is Jack, you'll learn more about him as we go, for now you should know that he's about 5 foot 6 and a half, he has messy, black, just-past-shoulder length hair. He also has a scar right above his lip, roughly two inches long. His skin is a pale ivory color. Right now he is wearing a white prison-like jumpsuit (the standard uniform) without shoes, only socks (he likes to slide in them). And his eyes are a solid grey.

Next to Jack stands another man, slightly shorter, blond hair, blue eyes, and the same jumpsuit, his name is Jake, he's not as important.

Jack: The sun is so bright ... I hate it.

Jake: You and me both buddy.

Jack: You know what I really miss? My cat. Poor Chihuahua, all alone, probably, eating someone else's cat.