Not sure if i should rewrite or not. I have been sharpening my writing skills
along with finally learning 7th grade English. So I kinda wish to rewrite
This story, Give it more backstory. Make the chapters longer.
Make it not too Complex. Story will go the same. But just
Added lore to "Wolf" but in the rewrite. the name will no longer be Wolf.
It will be a Male reader insert : ) as well as a Official Antagonist
Feedback on Some chapters means alot!!
Whether it be bad critics or tips or Things i should improve.
Thank you
Strider152
Jackdraconia
RedCrownedCrow
Thanks for giving feedback and
Helping out : )
Cheers!
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TEAM ELDEN. (RWBY X Elden Ring) Discontinued
Fantasy(Up for adoption for anyone who would like to have this story. ) Wolf. a lone Tarnished whom have brandished the elden ring before any other tarnished, due to his unending strength rivaling Radagon of the golden order after entering a fight with Dec...
