The Ultimate Assassin

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Lately I been reading all your reviews. and I'm thankful for all your support. I was actually scared of making this story, Not because of bad aggressive reviews, but because I felt it would just end as another story in the void. But thank you, even if you hated it, I appreciate you spend the time to read it.

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doremishine itsuko chapter 6 . 2h ago

check spelling and a bit the pronouns some words in this and the previous chapter are written wrong but are understandable don't worry when I used to written my own stories I was like that too.

Thanks for the review... and I'll try to follow your advice to make it even better

Also I'm going to add 2 new characters, Lala and Mio... they're not important at all, Just to add some friend to Komaru

Also I'm going to use American currency because 100 dollars is better than 11,011.832500 yen

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Chapter 6: Lucky sister

"Hey Komaru-chan want to hang out in my house today?" - said Lala trying to cheer up Komaru... she's been feeling sad because of Makoto missing - "we are going to order pizza, see a movie and spend a great time, we even have plans to go to the festival... so what do you say?" - Lala was trying to sound exciting to convince Komaru, who gave her a sad smile.

"Sorry Lala-chan, not today... I'm occupied" - she said while taking her backpack and leaving the room. Mia then got closer to Lala - "why are you trying so hard?... she still feeling sad for her brother" - Lala then sighed a little annoyed - "I know, but I just can't see her like that... It breaks my heart" - she said watching Komaru leave the room - "I heard she just spends the whole afternoon in her room crying, It's sad"

Komaru walked alone to her house... she hated walking on this path, since it was full of places filled of memories with her brother. She knew it... It was her fault he disappeared. He didn't want to go to Hope's Peak, and it was her the one that convince him... If he wasn't there... If he didn't go to that school... if she hadn't convinced him he would still be here.

She then cleaned her eyes, since they were threatening to fall into tears. After a couple of minutes, she got to her house... she then pulled her keys, and opened the door... after opening the door she could hear videogame soundtracks and someone talking

"really? I got a game over from that?" - said the voice. Komaru then walked to the living room where she saw the boys back, he was wearing a black hoodie and a Fluffy hat, He also was playing her Persona 5 Videogame (Which he lost and got a game over). She was really confused over this person... who was he? - "Umm excuse me?"

Then for her everything went in slow motion... the boy started turning around, and the more she could see of her face, the more she couldn't believe it. Her eyes falling into tears, while the face of the luckster turned around, and smiling.

"Hi Komaru... how was school?" - Komaru could believe it... she really couldn't believe it. Without saying anything she lunged to the luckster hugging him and crying while he stroked her head softly. - "It's it really you Oni-chan?" she said while crying, Naegi then hugged her to comfort her

"Yes Komaru, it's really me" - he said gently to his sister, he could feel the warm tears wetting his clothes. He could understand why she was this way... after all it may be true that his friends would miss him, but she was his sister.

They stayed like that for 10 minutes, before she separated - "feeling better?" - he asked her smiling making her blush - "yeah, sorry for crying so much" - yet the luckster was still smiling - "it's not a big deal after all I also missed you" - Komaru face burst red of embarrassment worrying Makoto worried - "Komaru your face is red... are you feeling sick?"- he said placing his forehead onto hers to check her temperature... this surprised her whom jumped standing up