error emo now

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guys im sorry if this isnt up to ur expectations im just really bad at writing and eng isnt my first language (not that i can speak or write well in my first one) this is a fun little project thing
EDITT, I changed and added some stuff bc i came back and was like "bro this is crap tff this shii need some changes" i also changes how error talks, bc t@Lk1ng l1-l1K3 tH1$ makes me angry so it will now be in this

Loud, obnoxious roar of joy echos throughout the stadium, the yelling could even be heard miles away.
"FELL SWEEP, FELL SWEEP," thousands of people in red chant, overriding the voices that cried for Error's unfortunate defeat. Fell, Underfell Sans stood on the highest platform grinning. His well earned, sparkly golden crown sat on his head, twinkling in the light.

An equally shiny band over his shoulder to his waist, "The ultimate Sans AU sexy man!" It read in big bold letters. Just below him, was Error. Error stands there on a sliver platform, dumbfounded. He lost to this 'anomaly', to Anomaly 13! This is insulting, dishonourable! He, the destroyer of universes, lost to this edgy prick?! He fought back a screaming urge to stir up a scene, his hands forms into a fist and crosses his arms. He glares at the floor.
"Heh, 'Destroyer', was it?" A voice he heard many times before calls out from above. "Sorry pal, looks like ye' just lost ta me." He had toothy grin on his face, just like how every version has. But this time, it seemed as if he was mocking him. His golden tooth glint in the sunlight.

"Shut up."

Error's response made his smile falter, but it quirked back up. "Whatever you say." He shrugged like Error isn't a high figure who could definitely kill him in a real and fair battle. He won anyway, no insults would be able to take that away. Suddenly, the chanting quieted down to hushed murmurs, the music has stopped.
The lights turned towards the massive gates that the contestants all came through. Something, or someone, was about to enter the stadium.

The speakers echos thorugh out the stadium as the one behind it taps the microphone, "ahem, ahem. My wonderful spectators, I have a very pleasant surprise for all of you," it paused. "A contestant that made a huge uproar from perhaps, a few days earlier? I'm sure you'd all remember him." The lights that were pointing at the gates turns a cyan hue with some turning a bright yellow. "You may already be able to tell who it is based off of the colours.." It says with obvious amusement. "Applause for the grreatt, one and only, SANS UNDERTALE!" The viewers screams in confusion and delight with this twist in the contest.

Fell and Error both looks at the gates as it opens, confused. A misty fog gush out from inside, a short figure stands among it. He walks out with his usual grin. He waves to the rows filled with thousands of people who screams his name and waves their flags around. Error took a few steps back.

Fell walks towards Classic, waving at him happily.

"Classic! Glad you made it, but.." He paused, thinking of what to say. Classic Sans is the Ultimate tumblr sexy man, he wasn't included in the AUs poll, so why is he here?
"You're probably wonderin' why I'm here, right?" Classic answered that thought, of course anyone would be confused why the ultimate man is here. The excited cheers of many from the seats broke the silence between the two, or three if you counted the other who lost. Anger was slowly rising in Error, 'are they here just to mock me?' His nails dug into his palms, grinding bits of his bones. 'But Sans wouldn't do that, he's better than these anomalies.' He watched the two carefully.

"Well, pal, you probably think you've won don't cha?" Classic broke the awkwardness between them just standing there.
"Yes, of course, Classy I've won just now, so why are you here? You're the winner of the official one so.." He yawned mid sentence. Fell blinked sleepily, the last match took a lot out of him. The ground around them has multiple cracks and holes in them due to him fighting Error. 'Man, Error was a tough one ta' tire out.' He thinks, glancing at Error who glares at him when he caught his sight, Fell looks back at Classic immediately, he gave Classic whiplash with how fast he turned around.

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