tum tak ( On Hold )

part 1

Hello guys
I am writing this os after such a long break
Just peep into know more and this idea of os is given by @YoutubeUser047

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As shown in the show monami propose Karan but Karan reject her proposal and then Karan propose monami but monami deny
Note there is no Aneesh in this story
So let's start the story

From the day when Karan is going to propose monami

In fairan room

Karan is moving continuosly left to right and faizi is sitting on the chair and eating samosa

Faizi ( while mouth filled with samosa) janabjiaajaapdujhiatsjsh
Karan (irritatingly) faizi ya to pehle kha le ya bol le
Faizi - janab ji ham to yeh keh rahe the ki aaj aap dukhi atma kyu Bane hue hai
Karan - yaar faizi mujhe monami ko propose karna hai par samjh ni aara kaise karu

Faizi - karna kya hai sidhe jao haath mei gulab lo kardo propose fir date par le jao aur kya

Karan - itna aasan nhi hai faizi jitna tujhe lag raha hai (sigh) faizi tujhe bhi pata hai monami ne pehle mujhe kiya tha propose par maine mana kar diya tha
Faizi : han Karan ham mante hai par monami tsunami bohot samjhdaar hai vo tumse Sacha pyaar karti hai vo tumhe mana nhi karengi
Karan : pata ni yr faizi kya hoga par mei use propose to aaj hi kardunga baki uska jo faisla hoga mujhe manzoor hai

Faizi : shabaash mere sher
Karan jaldi kardo use propose Varna kahi der na hojaye
Karan : han mei use aaj hi bol dunga ( with determined look )

On the other side

In monu,s room

Both Sid and monu is sitting on the bed and with tensed look on their face
And from sid ,s face it is clearly shown that he is crying for.long period of time
Monu: sid please aise rotdu si shakal mat bana
Sid : to ab kya karu mei monu tune dekha na aaj bhi kya  reports aayi hai  tere Dil mei hole hai
Monu : sid ab kya kar sakte hai
Sid : kya kar sakte hai kya tere survive karne ke sirf 50 % chances hai jo ki kam hogaye hai 
Yeh tujhe bhi pata hai pehle 70 the ab 50 hogaye hai
Monu: sid mere paas jitna time hai mei vo khushi khushi bitana chahti hu
Sid ( crying ) : monu please aisa mat bol mei tere bina kese jiyunga
Tu agr gayi na mujhe chod ke to mei to mei han mei na tere gappu ko flush kardunga
Monu : sid u mere gappu ko touch bhi mat karna
Sid : to mat ja na mujhe chod ke apne gappu ko chod ke
I love u monu
I love u sid '

At night
Karan is decorating the terrace with lights and plants and he is ready to propose monami

Drill area

All cadets are doing drill and Karan and faizi are standing and watching the drill

Karan : faizi yr kar kuch aur bhej monami ko terrace Pr
Faizi : are waah janab ji aap to bade betaab hore ho monami ko propose krne keliye
Karan (slightly blushing but immediately hide it ) woh woh tu hi kehta hai na ache kaam mei deri kesi to mei bs vahi kar raha hu
Faizi : ji janab hm karte hai kuch

Faizi goes to monami
Faizi : monami vo hme tumse kuch baat karni thi
Monami: hn bolo
Faizi : vo monami mei bol raha tha ki terrace par na bohot dhul hogyi hai tum Jake saaf krdogi
Monami: han faizi mei drill ke baad kardungi
Faizi : (being excited) thik hai tum fir 11 am par chli jana
Monami ( being confused by seeing faizi so much excited ) ohkay
After this faizi comes to Karan and says
Hogaya janab ji apka kaam maine Monami.ko.bol diya hai 11 baje terrace par jane ko
Thanku faizi thanku so much
Bs bs janab aapke liye to jaan bhi hazir hai
Karan hugs faizi

After drill

At 11 am

Monami comes to terrace and she sees that terrace is fully decorated with plants and lights
She is shocked to see the decoration

And the next moment what she sees she gets numb
Karan is sitting on his knees and holding a. Ring

Monami : Karan tum yeh kya kar rahe ho
Karan : monami.mujhe aaj bolne do
Monami mei tumse. Bohot bohot zyada pyaar karta hu
Mujhe pata hai maine tumhare pyaar ko thukra ke bohot badi galti Kari hai but now I am regretting my decision of denying u
I am really sorry Monami but i love u i really really love u
( Monami is really happy to see that finnally Karan is proposing her but suddenly she remembers that she is going to die )
Monami ( in mind) ( Nhi mei ye kya karne vali thi mei agr Karan ko han boldungi to Karan ki Zindagi barbaad hojayegi vo.meri condition dekh ke tut jayega nhi mei Karan ko pain mei nhi dekh sakti )
Karan yeh tum kya bol rahe ho khade hojao
Karan : monami i know that tum mujhse gussa ho or hona bhi chahiye but i really love u
Monami ....

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To be continued in next part

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