I am a hopeless writer but I'll give you any tips I have and maybe you can do something with them.
•Make sure you describe things.
•Write to suit you not everyone else.
•PUNCUATE! Put symbols where needed.
•GRAMMAR! It's really annoying when people use wrong grammar unless its supposed to be there.
•SPELLINGS! Please oh please spell things right.
I hope you find this helpful
*BYE*