Mythical Fights Revision

Chapter 2

"Finally!!" I almost shouted as we came into view of the Elven wall which surrounded the Elven Kingdom.

"Sorry...I really thought I knew the way from that tree." Ice said.

"You said that every other tree and you were wrong every time!" I complained, laughing a little. I led the way, following the wall until we came to the gate part of it.

"Looks like something is going on?" Ice mentioned. I looked over to see an elven girl with blond hair bending over to pick up a little wooden spider with what looked like wings attached to it. She was wearing a yellow t-shirt with brown pants and red suspenders.

"I'm sorry! I was sure it would work this time." She said to an angry-looking elven man. I noticed that the wood of the spider was bad...it was rotten which is bad for building things with.

"You say that every time! When are you going to give up this stupid hobby of yours? You'll never be able to make anything worth-wild...or that works!" the elven man snapped at the girl who looked like she might start to cry.

I growled under my breath, but it was louder than I meant it to be, "Way to be a jerk."

The elven man glared at me, "Excuse me!?"

I was not one to back down, so I stated, "I mean picking on a girl who's younger than you is a jerk move." I noticed a pile of wood and walked over, "She's even starting to cry because you're being a jerk to her. Sure, she messed something up but that's no excuse to act like a jerk. For starters miss, you need to pick the wood for your projects better. I can see that the wood used to make that...whatever it's supposed to be, is rotten so it's a bad choice for building. This one, however, is a better choice since it's not rotten or has any visible flaws in it so it'll be better." I picked up the chosen piece of wood and held it out to the elven girl who hesitatingly took it from me. "Don't give up! I'm sure you'll figure it out if you keep finding the flaws in your creation!" I added happily.

"Thanks." She said, a small smile appearing on her face before she ran off.

The elven man growled at me, "You don't know how annoying that little pest is." He looked like he was going to hit me for a second before a blade almost sliced his throat.

"Ops...Sorry." Ice said, apparently having "accidentally" knocked over a piece of armor that was on sale, including the sword that was now laying on the ground at the man's foot. "Come on Flame. Let's go." He added already walking away as if he was done with this conversation. I eyed the man but he seemed terrified of another "accidental" attack from my mysterious friend, so I quickly chased after Ice.