I am 16 now and I feel like camp camp should be in my life again so I'm going to fully rewatch the series and I will add onto this and edit the other chapters to give this book a smoother reading experience. I cannot say that the book will do better in storytelling because I like to write and cant tell a story to save my own ass. But I would to get better at it while I finish this book and make more.
Till then I wish you the best and I hope that when I do publish an official chapter you will be there to read it.