Yo friends and critics alike. This is my first public work for you to enjoy and scrutinize! I am very proud of the story and world I've built, but I'm not above criticism. My main goal in posting on Wattpad is to generate feedback for my story structure. Both positives and negatives are welcome.
If you're really into the story and are an artist, I would love to see any renderings of my setting and characters! I will post the most compelling ones that come my way!
As for the writing itself, I have combed through it multiple times to weed out grammar errors and shotty sentences. I may have missed some, but I will periodically review and update to help improve the reading experience.
Finally, thank you for taking the time to read my novel. That alone makes this entire experience a joy. There is nothing quite like hearing people share their opinions and praises for something you created.
Below are some helpful tips for how my writing style works:
'Example 1'---quoting a prior statement or emphasizing a name or object
Example 2 ---character thoughts or telepathic conversations
Example 3---Shouting or voice distortion
***---Time Skip or change in perspective
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Causality Chronicles-The Last Tempest
FantasyWhat happens when you have nothing else to live for? What is one to do when your final purpose in life is stripped away by the laws of cosmological distance? Rei, a scientist turned soldier, discovers these truths the hard way. Summoned away from Ea...
