The Orb [short story] (slight editing)

What In The World Did I Find

What...was that. I totally forgot this existed until now. Eigth grade me was...questionable at best with her writing but it's kinda crazy how now I'm looking back at it and being halfway through my sophomore year of high school. There were some good parts of this story, some bad, and a lot worse, but who knows, maybe I'll go back to it from time to time to edit and fix it all. I'm glad to know I haven't lost my interest in writing and I might use this as inspiration for a short story I have to write to apply for a literary arts school. I appreciate the kind comments a lot and wish I had seen them sooner and maybe it would have encouraged me to revisit the story sooner. Ok well, I guess that's it for now, maybe I'll revise this soon.

So please be patient if you see plot holes or name changes, I know there are plenty and since I've not done editing it all the way they might be there a bit longer. Please ignore them lol.

Update: I finished my rough draft! Sorry for all the inconsistency but I've finished the main part now. I'll still be going through and maybe adding a filler chapter here and there, building up the friendship a little more, give the story some more depth but I'll be updating a little slower now since school is starting again tomorrow.

Also, guys, this book is completely open to suggestions. If you have an idea of where a filler chapter could be or about, or how to add more depth to the characters and want to see it in there, feel free to message me and we can talk it out. This also includes discovered plot holes, typos, and inconsistencies. I mean stories are for a community so why not let them be guided by a community ya know?